Unspoken (WIP, Demo Ver. 0.0.2)

I think most people are satisfied with basic customization like hair, hair color, eye color, skin color, etc. I can think of a few more like clothing (could make variables for t-shirt, coat, hat, which should be enough, readers will most likely communicate it if they feel there is a lack of customization), scars, facial hair, or if you want to give racial features just give them a few choices like in Children of The Gods, like Asian, Black/White American, That’s all I can think of right now appearance-wise, cuz I just woke up. But I’ll probably be back with other ideas if needed/ people don’t suggest anything else if I have ideas.

I think that as long as it suits the story shouldn’t matter too much. But I think that having a general idea of what your character looks like for example: White American, Mid-length Brown Hair, Brown Eyes, Balbo Moustache, Dark Grey Overcoat with Red Checkered flannel shirt and a scarf. Is pretty in depth and should satisfy pretty much everyone, if not… Like I said they will tell you.

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I’m currently taking a Criminal Justice class, and I just wanted to say, I enjoyed the fuck out of those two pages. Lots of potential already shown, here.

Also, got this. Just figured I’d report it. I don’t know shit about coding, so I apologise if it’s nothing. Regardless, here:

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Thank you very very much!! :smiley:

Yeah, that error just means the end XD
I have yet to code an end of demo page.

That’s awesome that you’re taking criminal justice! I was pursuing criminal justice (specializing in hostage negotiation) before I decided on the Army.

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Demo version 0.0.2 uploaded!

Added difficulty level with some functionality, added more stats, reorganized coding to be less of a headache for myself to sort through

https://dashingdon.com/go/1271

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Use *goto_scene ending to make it easier on those who look for the errors so the end of the game isn’t included among them. Also as always with these WIP’s I will reccomend a quick test. First tab of the folder called quicktest open it with Firefox and it will tell you your errors.

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@CowboyHooah

Have you actually entered the Army? If so, thank you for your service!

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Not quite yet but I’m in the process currently :slight_smile:

Thank you!

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So unfortunately, all the files for this project were lost when I switched computers. Worry not though! This setback allowed me to renew the project with a stronger foundation. Although it now lives by a different name, the new forum and game gives this story life through a similar premise and idea. Thanks for understanding!

New Link: Imminent Threat WIP (Updated 5/26/17)

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