Triaina: Academy - WIP - Update 1.28 - (9/15/2024)

I haven’t finished the demo, but I did want to talk about the RO route choice (the one where we permanently decide who to romance). Personally, I think it needs to be either
A. Later in the game or
B. All the ROs are available.

As of right now, it show the ones we’ve spent the most time with, I think. Or maybe have the best relationships (for me, 3 are available). But there haven’t been a ton of times to spend time with the ROs outside of classes. And as a couple of examples, neither Raven or Pierce have given much reason for us to want to spend time with them, other than knowing they’re ROs and must get better. Does this make sense?

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Or, at least, clarify during the earlier choice where you choose who to talk to before sleeping that it’s going to narrow down to who you’re finally going to pick to romance later on

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I thought about this for a while, because there really usually isn’t many places to spend time with them, and then I read above and saw your comment about being able to throw them full-force and was like “OH. You can choose them as your partner for that class. I 100% forgot about that :sob:”. I think it’s super interesting how that one little choice dictates who you get to spend your time with in that class for… basically the rest of the game. I kept choosing L as my partner because I felt guilty, but next time I do a run I’ll go for S, give em an actual fair chance, haha :sweat_smile:.

AND ONE MORE THING!!! WHAT WAS UP WITH THEM CHECKING OUT THE ROCKS AFTER CLASS??? AHHH!!! SO MANY QUESTIONS!!

Ok so I just finished doing that; and I was expecting to be proven wrong, to see Xero refer to us as his child just as Storm does, now that the situation isn’t so dire. BUT I WAS NOT! VINDICATIOOOONNNN!!!
Here are the two excerpts that are in the same place as the previous post, but from Xero instead of Storm:

“I could never abide such a cruel ideology,” a familiar studious voice returns, finding the tall figure of your father approaching Gillian with a disappointed expression, “I had heard you were once a man respected by peers and subordinates alike. It is hard to see a man like that resulting from such a self-serving thought.”

Your father doesn’t back down, though he adjusts his glasses nervously, “Be that as it may… There are important matters to discuss. With you included.”

and instead of ending with something similar to Storm’s statement:

Your father is silent for a moment as he looks into the face of a fellow veteran, before slowly turning to you, “Go on. I will be taking things over from here. The young… should enjoy peaceable times as much as they can. For as long as it lasts.”

Xero says THIS:

Richter Xero sighs softly, turning to you with a weak smile, “I apologize for the sudden appearance. I will be sure to explain everything to you later, but for now, please simply enjoy the festival. Students should have that right.”

STUDENTS. STUDENTS. WE HAVEN’T SEEN THIS MAN IN GOD KNOWS HOW LONG AND THIS IS HOW HE TALKS TO US, AND IT HONESTLY EXPLAINS SO MUCH, I’M ECSTATIC. The way I play my MC fits very well with a father like this. This is so insane to me, in all the routes W/ him I’ve played (Raven, M, Vin but to a lesser extent (I talk about that in the previous post,)) he barely acknowledges you unless he’s talking directly to you… and he’s more friendly, yes, but it’s very professionally friendly, and though Storm is somber, his interactions with the MC are much more personal and intimate. He talks about them way more. He considers them way more. Xero has other things to worry about, things he considers more immediately important, and his child isn’t even at the forefront of his mind at ALL. The implications for this…

Anyways I’m going to go insane about the differences between the different dads forever, just. Not only does it allow your MC to feel like a connected part of the world, the parents are DIFFERENT PEOPLE, WHO HAVE THEIR OWN LIVES AND FLAWS AND MANNERISMS!!! SO MUCH SO THAT I NOTICED IT, AND WAS CORRECT IN MY ASSUMPTIONS!!! God I love this IF. (ALSO. WHAT IS XERO TRYING TO TALK TO GILLIAN ABOUT??? :eyes: THIS DIDN’T HAPPEN W/ STORM… WHY DID HE LEAVE THE BUNKER WHAT CAME UP??)

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Oh been a long time, thanks for the update. Love your story a lot :heart:

See, ever since I got caught trying to dig a grave for that murder because the ground was too hard, I’ve been really into geology.”

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The RO route choice is based on whose room you visited earlier and you can visit a max of 3 rooms

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Considering your enjoyment of the father’s differences, I would be interested in seeing how you view the Scurra father in his appearances, as he is also markedly different from the other two in his interactions with both the MC and other characters haha.

As I have it written, you are given the list of 9 ROs to visit the dorm of, which basically acts as a sieve where you can pick up to three people to talk to, and of those three youll later be given an option on who youd like to commit to and lock your route.

This filter is put in place for several reasons. One, if people find enjoyment in multiple characters, it somewhat helps to first narrow down the choices before making a big final decision. Its easier to digest. Two, narritively speaking, i dont find it feasable for All Nine ROs to say theyre available to you, or for the MC to make potential plans with nine people at once for every RO choice to be selectable during that choice set.

As for the time that the actual lock in to the romance takes place within the story, it is very early in the story intentionally. One reason is simply because it is a primarily romance oriented book, i want to place the majority of my book under the character building of that romantic goal. Romance being a very time-consuming thing, especially for some characters like V or P, i find it’s better to have an early starting point haha

The other reason is that with how the ROs story is planned for each route having the two paths, i need to start early to give myself enough time in the story to actually implement the key decisions that will affect the path. I have to make sure that the player stays with one character throughout the developments of the story by locking the route so they can have the option to then affect that character, if that makes sense haha. The problem with pushing the RO route lock until later is that i will either have to compress multiple important decisions within a short time frame in the narrative, which will feel very rushed, or risk eclipsing my intended word count by trying to expand the story far enough to where the key decisions are still well paced throughout, which is a daunting additional workload for me haha

Nevertheless, im happy to take your thoughts to mind. With the main concern being that you dont feel there is enough of a preview of each of the characters before the big locking decision is made, i can look into retroactively adding an additional scene or two for each RO before that point in the story if i find that its a big concern for many. I did my best to give what is basically the general “overview” of every character before that point, and pursuing the RO is more relavant to who you want to dig deeper into the character with haha. If you simply dont enjoy certain character types from what is given, thats more of a preference detail i cant help no matter how much detail about the character i give before locking the route. If its found that theres a lack of good character introduction or no good scenes related to them, thats something i can fix haha

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:eyes: :eyes:… Do you think it would be possible to add more saves :point_right::point_left:? (This is the only IF where I have more than 1 MC. WELP, time to add another to the roster :sob:)

Unfortunately i believe i have the max number of save slots that dashingdon is able to give, so i cannot haha

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I finished the demo and I really liked it! I think Emil is very sweet and cute! Now I’m on my second play through (gotta check out all the ROs). One thing I did notice was that we can’t have brown eyes. Which isn’t a big deal, I just found it a little weird. Especially given how common they are. Well, I’m diving back in. We’ll see if I have any other random little comments

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Caps error here.

Also, which path is considered “change for the better” and which is “change for the worse” in Emma’s case? That’s how the first post describes these paths.

The first option where you take the woman to the hospital first steers E on the ‘good influence’ route while going after the bad guys steers E to the ‘bad influence’ route so, yeah

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I feel attacked the F slander

I usually play it as the college student brain fog. Who has time to worry about a stalker when I got exams coming up? And all this homework! And the instructors won’t say which stuff is actually on the test because they want you to remember everything. My mc’s main worry is the possibility of having to buy new sheets. They’re not made of money here!

Honestly, the fact that this strange student is already this into them is a relief in a sense. At the very least, they don’t have to worry about finding a girlfriend and trying to figure out how to progress the relationship. This girl already wants to marry us! Finally, a life goal that’s achievable with minimal stress!

“Oh, the showers are free here! I was worried about that too!”

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How do you increase agility?

Good question

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Raven is nice because it’s nice feeling loved. Thank you for making me feel loved

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I like the game but I feel that you’re spreading yourself waaay too thin with all the RO content.

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I love stories where MC is at a boarding school! I wasn’t sure how much sci-fi the story’ll be, but it’s great fun and not too sci-fi for me (for now :smile:), the fact that we can choose our superpower is a big plus and there are twins! :sparkling_heart:
But so many LI! They all have interesting characteristics and they seem very live like, but there are too many of them. Right now i only remember the one i found interesting (Emil, Matthew, Levi, Vin, Raven and maybe Flay. [after Raven’s route, i’ll need a therapy :scream:] Pierce is way too similar to my MC to try to have some relationship and i wasn’t interested in trying to date Robin so far.)
It’s interesting story and i can’t wait to read more.

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Pronoun glitch during the bookstore on L’s route. This one should say “she”.

“the original”

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