Finally got somewhere somewhat workable for my WIP! I’ve been trying to do some alpha testing, but I’d like a bigger group to get some input for the beginning.
I’m only about 4k words in (not counting my notes before the start of the game), but I’d like to get some sort of idea for how my flow is so far, and if it makes sense the way I’m jumping around, that sort of thing. I have some notes/questions on the first page, but they’re just a loose guide in this case.
Also, do you think that adding headers when switching point of view (not necessarily ones with words, just a simple design) would clear things up and/or add to the game?
Abstract: In a world where witches are hunted like animals, one child survives. As they stand over the remnants of a life destroyed, they make a contract with a demon to find those responsible and deal their personal sense of justice. What started as revenge will change the fate of an entire country as the witch decides how much they are willing to give up for the sake of a grudge.