The Unwanted Warrior

[Ocerk]

@AyaNino

if Leo dies, I riot.

I don’t think @NutellaQueen would kill her off.

…Right?

[Sammysam]

I think if she dies it will be because the MC wanted to kill her…

[Harley_Robin_Evans]

He said that you can kill her it’s a choice

[Harley_Robin_Evans]

Oh sorry when I play through it I’m going to kill everyone of the family members

[tooweiss]

@NutellaQueen

This is what we called “forbidden love”. But if you can become King/Queen, nobody will dare to question you.

Yess. I love it. I’m glad people won’t be accepting towards it. It makes it realistic and more dramatic. You got my hyped for all these interactions.
P.S. Leo is so adorable I had a hard time saying no to her

[Asura]

@Sammysam

@idonotlikeusernames

True we can become a spymaster with real “little birds”

…my Mc actually just wants friends.

And being a knight maybe? They really don’t want to rule, so…let them just run around doing something they are good at (like making stab stab with a sword)? And if the rest of the family doesn’t want them they gladly will work for/with any other noble they can find. (…I really hope for a RO that let’s MC and them be a battle couple).

@SeventhJackel

I know this wip is way too new for my crazy theories, and I know that the title is most likely a placeholder, but I can’t help but suspect that the warrior that is unwanted will turn out to be little Leo once we’ve trained her against everyone’s wishes.

So congratulations @NutellaQueen for sending me down the rabbit hole faster than any other story on here. Well done.

Ooh, maybe the MC could take Leo with them when they leave, make her their squire!

@NutellaQueen

Like @Sammysam said, if you choose to kill her, she dies.

People die when they are killed!

[Arcane_warrior]

I think am going to do a military Coup d’état.

[NutellaQueen]

There’s a sword fighting scene in this update, I suck at this. I watched some fight scenes to get some ideas., but I’m still not sure about that one. Please let me know if there’s anything wrong with that scene.

Also tell me if there are errors/bugs/grammar mistakes etc.

Thank you!

P.s. The family dinner scene will be in the next update

[Logan3000x]

one word. ‘step mother’ meaning we are either the son of a concubine or our mother was the queen but die. (probably the concubine)

[pauleno2000]

Yeah it was my bad i forgot it said we were bastards in the game description

[Talyrion]

It seems like an interesting project so far, I admit, though I am not sure what part the whole “can speak to animals” will play.

I have to admit, though, having a character named Leonora and another Eleanor is a bit confusing.

[augustus27]

Yeah, for once i do hope that the whole speak with animals thing is barely important and that this is just a medieval political game

[NutellaQueen]

@Talyrion

I have to admit, though, having a character named Leonora and another Eleanor is a bit confusing.

Yeah, I get confused sometimes too I think I will start calling Leonora “Leo”.

@augustus27

Yeah, for once i do hope that the whole speak with animals thing is barely important and that this is just a medieval political game

Communicating with animals is important. You can use this power to protect your Kingdom and earn people’s trust or punish every single person who turned your life into hell. Animals are your strong allies.

[augustus27]

Hm that does sound interesting, but can i still hunt and eat animals?

[NutellaQueen]

@augustus27

but can i still hunt and eat animals?

You can eat animals, but going to the hunt would destroy your relationship with animals. The best thing is let hunters go to hunt for you.

[lokidemon007]

Nice new scene, I like it!

[Lizzy]

@NutellaQueen

@idonotlikeusernames

Of course you can romance them, but how accepted is that sort of thing in this gameworld?

This is what we called “forbidden love”. But if you can become King/Queen, nobody will dare to question you.

As they shouldn’t, since my goal is to be Queen then that works out nicely

@NutellaQueen

@Lizzy

I’d really like to marry my RO by the end

You have to work hard for that (If you want to romance Eleanor) but that’s not impossible…

Well I haven’t settled on who will win my heart yet, need to get to know them first, but Eleanor is certainly not counted out

[Terrell_Williams]

“Show me your skills, “Prince”.”

I played as a girl

Leonora smiles and runs towards his father. He dismounts his horse, crouch down to hug his little girl.

The line that says Leonora smiles and runs towards his father

[Shawnheatherly]

Sounds quite promising. Playing the blacksheep and getting to make complicated family relationships? Oh, now there’s some potential. How old is the step-mother supposed to be? And for potential deviousness, is there any chance of framing her for the death of your siblings and/or making it look like she has had an affair?

[NutellaQueen]

@Terrell_Williams

“Show me your skills, “Prince”.”

I played as a girl

Leonora smiles and runs towards his father. He dismounts his horse, crouch down to hug his little girl.

The line that says Leonora smiles and runs towards his father

All of those mistakes are fixed!

@Lizzy

Well I haven’t settled on who will win my heart yet, need to get to know them first,

You’ll meet them soon. Also, my personal favorite RO is Katherine I love that character. You will probably meet her in the next update.

@Shawnheatherly

is there any chance of framing her for the death of your siblings and/or making it look like she has had an affair?

Oh you hate her so much, don’t you Well, I haven’t finish the story yet, so I will think about it. It can be a very good revenge.