what a work of art, I’m going to highlight some points that can be improved in my view, the height should cause a reaction from people since it’s not very normal for someone with 6’3 in Japan, another thing is changing the canon, what do you think about the system rewards us when we change something canonical, I found it impressive how interesting you made the characters, I felt inside that world.
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Can we get a few other body types like athletic and muscular?
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This is the first game made by a Brazilian that I saw here, I really liked the idea of the game, I hope the game works out 
Ps:apparently you can’t post in Portuguese here lol
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Probably not, considering the option was just removed this update.
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Fixed!
When I revise, I’ll pay attention to adding some parts that highlight your appearance choices!
Not initially, but you can become like that through training.
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Very nice! I like it so far. The hero actually seems like a decent guy, at least for now (I hope he doesn’t piss me off later, because so far I want to treat him like a puppy). I can’t wait for the story to actually take off!
By the way, this came to my head, but can we do this?
It’d be really cool to replicate some anime moves, like the Gates of Babylon.
I’d specially like to replicate Fuuga!
Actually, there are plenty of moves I’d love to replicate. I get excited just thinking about it lol.
You’ve already said we can do some moves people have presented here. What exactly does that mean, like, we will be able to use magic that has the same effect, or will it be an actual reference to that anime move? I’d love the latter, because it’s a wet dream to replicate Gates of Babylon or Fuuga.
Anyway, love this! I can’t wait for more.
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Have you ever watched Princess Tutu? It’s a ballet/magical-girl anime so it might not be to your taste, but the plot is basically characters in a fairy tale diverging from/pushing against the stream of the story. I though of it as I was reading the demo.
Good start.
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I noticed when playing I chose to explore the main building and it said it took me to the dormitory but still explored the main building. Then when choosing which colosseum entrance to wait at after exploring they all say A. They do still take you where you chose though.
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Is there a way to explore the main building and then head to the administrative office? While the notion of seeing the protagonist heading towards it or coming across the office’s broadcast after exploring the main building or dormitory seems unlikely, a case could be made for MC’s situation being just as unlikely, if anything, likely or not, plot-relevant things seem to cross paths with them more often than not, those two places hold precious info no?
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I’m going to wait for the 1st arc to be finished, so I can get a first impression for real XD. But good to see this project getting updated 
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“Ged oud uf da wae!" I hear a sudden voice from behind me, approaching rapidly.
Yeah, so, whatever comes of this IF, let it be known I laughed my ass off for a solid minute reading this 
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Sorry I’m commenting so much but I love this book so much it already feels like I’m in a anime and oh I can’t wait to meet katsuo and saduse him and turned him into a submissive teddy bear and add him to my harem along with the golden retriever of a man kazuki so yeah I love this
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Well other than receiving awareness about being an NPC there still not much to tell, choosing to avoid the primary character for now only to stumble on teacher in the dorm.
I Imagine my Character is suffering some inferiority complex, I want to be at least decent before mingle with primary character.
Already did try to mingle but the update primarily about introduction/first impression and the reaction is not satisfactory being weak and all.
I think I’ll stick being silent observer/stalker for now and focus plotting my way upwards and get stronger.
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I did th same lol but talking with the hero is fine .He isn’t arrogant and other things so I will only interact with him until the mc gets stronger lol.
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Yeah true I did try to interact with character, only hero apparently is seem decently approachable.
But still I think it’s fun to play hidden boss role and avoid interaction too deep, time is not on our MC side being trash mob and all they will need a serious level grind/powering up to be in par with primary character.
I am thinking like first two or three chapter I would try to put more focus on leveling up than building relationship like 80%-20%.
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Just one question how long until our MC can cast fire ball or some basic stuff of powering up? this is as expected as for the introduction mostly being dismissive and ignored I want to make them swallow their guts it’s frustrated me with no end.
Which a good thing since this what Author aiming right? Building up motivation to be better and going up the rank.
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lol’d at this. love the dialogue choices so far
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Will we have the surprisingly powerful student council trope with the possible “secret police” group that they have in order to keep the peace, in some anime I seen
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Fixed! Thank you!
So, I really want to confirm all the types of magic/spells/skills you guys want to be able to do in the game, but I prefer to abstain from doing so from now on. xD
The game will have a battle mechanic where you’ll have a tab with all the skills and powers you’ve learned so far to use - but, clearly, that’s a lot of writing work. So, I need to plan exactly which powers/skills/magic you’ll be able to learn to use in combat in a viable way.
For now, I don’t want to dwell on it too much. The update after the Festival will focus on that, so let’s discuss it when we get there!
Is the anime from the crocodile meme yeah?
Never watched, but it gives me a lot of Sailor Moon vibes! May watch it someday!
Yup, but I cut that out because it’s unfinished. It’ll be there in the festival update, though.
I’ll add an option to avoid interacting with the teacher/Sonoda when going to the dormitory. You’ll still encounter them, but at least you’ll be able to leave as soon as they appear in front of you.
Next update though.
After the Festival, you should already be able to learn some things - but I’m not sure about the fireball. I still need to plan the balancing of abilities, that is, how easy and fast it is to obtain X spell/skill/magic/ability.
I have several characters noted down here, including one from the student council, but he probably won’t have that much focus, at least not for now.
There are several characters I’ve noted down that I may or may not end up using, or perhaps they’ll even have more prominence than I initially expected later on. 
Just time will tell
Thank you for the support and the kind words! I’ve been carefully keeping track of everything you’ve been saying, especially the results of the polls. I’ll focus on improving the writing and addressing some areas that need attention!
I’ve been advised to start a Patreon to help cover my bills - which would give me more leeway to focus on writing. As mentioned in the FAQ, I don’t feel it’s fair to receive money for a product that’s still quite bland, but indeed, a few cents would help me a lot already.
I’ll look into it, and if I do create a Patreon, I’ll try to make it fair and affordable so everyone benefits.
I also thought that if I create a Discord server, I could have a channel just to update you daily on the progress of the next update. For example, I could let you know how many words I wrote each day so you can keep track.
Well, for now, that’s it. I don’t have much else to say! 
But feel free to share your thoughts on what I’ve mentioned here!
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A new update! YES! I’m really excited to what comes next at the festival, tbh. :]
Here’s some typos I found:
*wavy
*Anonymous
this should be capitalized.
*paintings
you forgot a period, here. :>
I can’t wait for when classes actually begin! My MC is basically gonna live in the library… (if that’s possible, lol)
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