I’m Sophia and I just started a few weeks ago. I want to make a story but… I’m afraid if it will be a failure or something. I haven’t started. But I have an idea for the story. (Sorry for any wrong grammar)
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Title: Another World (Not Final)
You’re just super duper normal teenager who was transported to a world of magic. You don’t know why you’re here… But there’s one thing… You were summoned to save the world from the terrifying dark mage! So basically, you’ve become a hero. What will you do? Will you succeed saving the world? Or end up destroying it? Will you live or die? Will you stay or go back to your own world?
It’s all up to you.
There are 5 possible romances. Your childhood friend, the princess/prince, a mage, a military officer, and the dark mage.(yes you can romance the dark mage)
Yeah it looks like you have a wide range of endings/avenues and the plot seems fine. Sounds like something I would enjoy
Just a small suggestion maybe make it so that you were summoned to this world for either purpose, to either join the “white/good mage” and defeat the evil one or join the dark mage and defeat the “good mage”
It’s just my personal take
Magic of OZ! Is one of the best way to begin a history of alternative-world heroine.
Like that! Our “Dorothy” must be the kind of girl that struggled with the typical teen dilemmas:
1 - What i will be when i grow?
2 - why does the boys don’t like/me found on me?(Or why my boyfriend are cheating on me!)
3 - why no one invite me to the prom?
4 - why i suck in sports?..
Every choice influence the character development (status) of your Main character.
So the “Great Happening” occur and she is transported to the “Special world”.
End of first act.
For the call to quest event i suggest that you transform the dillemmas of the first act into events in the “Special world”.
Like: If no one invite her to the prom. The Prince raise a ball on her name. And she see herself became popular witing the kingdom. And she see herself become popular within the kingdom. (Act of intrigues and appearances)
If she suck on sports. The guard is dismissed from his duty because of a misunderstand. And she is the one that must be trained to became the heroine the people expect. So she can choose him to be her “coach” as a form to help him replenish his honor in the kingdom.
Agreed! The form of history you adopt will incide in the best branch tree you can work. For example:
If you history is rommance driven. The atributes and the development points that the main character has with her mates will lock/unlock events in the history. So will be better work in an Vairiables oriented script markers.
Also if is more adventure-like. Will be better if you work in the scenes of batle/negociation/trap/exploration before you add them to the history brach and the dialogues tree. So will be more classical *goto *gosub stile of coding.
