The Ultimate Magic Student (WIP) (148K) (+14K 02/20)

That would rock.

Sadly though, I can get two games to remember since they are most memorable to me. Some might be hidden much more deeper that I can’t even remember them at all or I just included other games from other text games.

I can remember their contents but not their titles so its going to be difficult.

One is where you are in a body of a soon-to-be-villainess(?) and you are put into some sort of asylum or something.

Another is where you are reincarnated as a side character with some possessive people coming to get you. (Mi sol this, mi sol that, can you shut up you little-)

My memory is kinda hazy since a lot of time has passed so that’s an issue.

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This one I’m pretty sure is The Graves of Heirs which is on Dashingdon. I’m pretty sure it’s abandoned though.

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damn it’s a shame… what about the other one, any idea?

I don’t know, Im afraid.

of what?

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They’re saying “I’m afraid that I don’t know.”

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oh ok

damn ok bro ;-;

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So @ZCometa can MC master multiple forms of magic or there class limitations where we have to choose a class which limit us to one or two times because I like to play as a jack of all trades and well side characters acknowledge MC is skilled in multiple kinds of magic and have reactions and also it will be extremely fun to see the povs of the ros meeting MC for the first time

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Tainted Souls: Fables & Myths maybe?

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Corrupt magic perfect for my dark wizard who gonna give the MC a bad time in the future. Nothing personal against him apart from that character wants to derail as much as he can from the original plot.

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Now that I think about it, this wip reminds me of that manhwa “The Extra is too strong”, tho the MC reincarnates from the real world to a novel. Regardless I can’t wait to play an op character that has every stat maxed,( i will not be buying the manga chapters bc it’s more exciting that way lol), helping out best boi protagonist and casually have every type of magic in the world. Can’t wait to go hollow purple punch on the competition lol

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Thank you for your insights, they helped me think about it a bit better! So, I’ve decided to split the update into part 1 and part 2 to make things less complicated for all of us!

That being said, the first part of the update, with 31K words, will be released…

TODAY!

I just need to organize a few things before posting (should take a few minutes after this post here).


Good predictions! In the next update there are more clues to look out for, so watch out!


Funai Hiromi for sure!

Yes, yes and also yes!


Sure, very possible to use singing magic. Dunno about love sick fans though :smile:


Well, the magic system will classify people into types/classes, but, as mentioned before, one of the systems I based it on was from Hunter x Hunter, and like in that series, you can focus on performing magic of another class/type.

The catch is, the more distinct the class/type is from yours, the harder it is to master – but, hey, you have the System precisely to be overpowered, right?

If you use the System cleverly, you can easily master the magic you want regardless of your character’s class/type.


Finally someone who doesn’t want to destroy him :sob: :smile:


See ya on the update soon

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im so glad you like my idea really hope you include it becouse in IFs its a rare power option

Here it is, finally, PART 1 of the Update 0.1.1!

You can access it now, no need to read all this text here. This post is just a “dev notes”.

As mentioned before, this update brings 31K new words to the game, introducing the first part of the Entrance Ceremony + Festival.

These 31K can be divided as follows:

  • 5K of the new Glossary.
  • 26K of content.

Total: 36K

Part 2 of the Update will be about the Festival, as I cut Part 1 exactly where it begins.

However, the festival is much smaller in comparison. It will probably be around only 10K to 15K words. (Maybe less or maybe more, it’s just an estimate after all!)


About the new content

With about 26k words of new content, it might seem like a single run of the demo would provide a substantial reading experience. However, I want to warn you that it’s not quite like that!

One of my focuses in this event/chapter is to demonstrate that important events can unfold in various ways and have multiple paths to follow. So, if you only play through once, you’ll see very little of the content – the idea here is to replay!

Keep in mind that there are both major and minor changes depending on your choices – some dialogues and scenes require specific sequences to access.

Feel free to explore!


Why Update “0.1.1”?

To keep things more organized for you all, I’ve decided to give numbers to the updates.

When you want to check the game’s progress quickly, without having to read my posts or access the game itself, you just look at the numbers!

The first number indicates the overall state of the game: is it finished or not? If you only want to play when the main story is ready, just check this number. If it’s 0, it’s not complete, and if it’s 1, it’s complete!

“But if the story is complete, why bother numbering it? Just say it’s complete!” - Completing the main story doesn’t mean I won’t need to change some things, fix or even add extra content later. So, that’s what this number is for!

The second number indicates the Arc where the story is. The plan is to have around 12 arcs (if not 12, it will be very close). The number in this position indicates at which stage of the story the game has reached.

The third number indicates the version of the update. This update, for example, indicates that it’s the first update of Arc 1 - meaning, the next update will be 0.1.2!

It’s as simple as that!


Updated things from the content you already had in the previous demo:

  • Removed the option to have an athletic body at the beginning.
  • Glossary updated with several new pieces of information, including about characters.
  • Some changes in the introduction text to make the story’s proposal clearer.
  • Fixed the bug where eyes were blue when they shouldn’t be.

There are still things I need to change from Arc 0 that were discussed here in this thread, but don’t worry, everything is noted in my to-do list.

I’ll release these other changes along with Update PART 2!


Things I ask you to report to me:

Please let me know about any spelling errors, English mistakes, etc. Remembering that English is not my first language!

Found a bug, a page that is too long, sentences and paragraphs that shouldn’t be there or are in the wrong order, please let me know too!

Not sure if something is intentional or not? Report it too! As far as I know, I’m pretty careless so please let me know about everything! :smile:

For reference, all paths leading to the beginning of the Festival ends the demo. The only exception is the option to go to the administration office, which also ends the demo.


Comment on what you think of the new content!

I really want to hear your opinions on what I’m presenting so far. And please, don’t hesitate to criticize if there’s criticism!

Have a suggestion?
Do you think X scene would be better in a certain way?
Do you think your character could have reacted differently in X scene?

Speak up without fear! After all, it’s a demo, and it will change a lot over time.


Polls about the update:

What do you think of the pacing of the scenes?

  • Too slow
  • Slow
  • Perfect
  • Fast
  • Too fast
0 voters

Do you think the scenes need more detail?

  • Yes, a lot
  • Yes, a little
  • No
0 voters

Is the the story/text/scenes confusing?

  • Yes, in a lot of scenes
  • Yes, a little
  • No
0 voters

After this Update, which one are you most excited to spend time with?

  • Kawabata Kazuki, the Hero
  • Arai Katsuo, the Rival
  • Usui Usagi, the Hotheaded
  • Fukushima Sakura, the Beauty
  • Ellen Cassandra Mountbatten-Windsor, the Princess
  • Okawa Hiroko, the Diligent
  • Komatsu Akio, the Genius
  • Sonoda Yoshito , the Antisocial
  • Funai Hiromi, the Fierce Sensei
  • Miyata Ryota, the Sloppy Sensei
0 voters
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Woops I forgot to put the Save State code, my bad

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Updated!

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That was really good, I just hope I get the option to beat the shit out of the Tsundere later on

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When I was exploring the main building, it took me directly to the exploring the dormitories options. When I was done that, I was able to explore the dormitories again, even though I already had.

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