I’m really enjoying Pocket Dimension a lot 
One small suggestion: would it be possible to give additional options that customize your custom race’s appearances? For example long ears (Elves), third eye (Garlean concept from Final Fantasy or a literal extra eye), horns, animal ears etc. Skin tones are much more complicated I think. But it would be nice to choose different colors that appear on those races (e.g. blue, light blue, pink, red or standard human skin colors). That’s all! Thank you for another banger release! Awesome as always.
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what is the strongest power in your own opinion?
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I guess later when I have the time I could play around with the race customisation and allow you to further customise your planet’s race.
Honestly this question has been on my mind a lot. I’ve always just wondered if an all out battle royale were to occur between all the MCs power routes, which power would reign supreme.
But that’s a difficult question to answer because deepened on how the powers are used each power user has a percentage chance to come out on top.
So I’d just say the power that has the highest percentage of coming out on top and also the most versatile power is the Divine arsenal.
Though it’s not by a margin but at least in my opinion it’s at least an inch above some.
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I personally love the enhanced intellect, because when being used, it basically means you can come up with a plan in any situation, and it will work. If I understand it properly, it means you can also build a strength based character, and be basically unstoppable later on in the book.
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I agree, but I think that a human path would not be one in which we face the enemy head-on, but rather one in which we use tricks and deceptions such as attracting (charm) the enemy into a trap (intelligence) it would basically be a difficult mode in which all skills would be tested, but I know this would be difficult to do in both coding and writing so ignore what I said if I’m talking nonsense (the game is already amazing 
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Well done @Ivan_WM . I very much enjoyed the update 
But now onto spoiler life, Adam must die you dare harm my sister I’ll end your existence in my domain. Secondly loved that little chat with our sis got me all big bro mode to the extreme. Lastly I must kill this Michael myself he dares to stab me 
. Also what happened to Wolf he in my pocket or he dodo dead? PS. Loved the Alexis and Adam Pov 
“You are beneath me.” Mwah! absolute chef’s kiss. 
Small code break I believe
Me phoning my Japanese Jesus in my domain to prepare for Adam’s funeral.
Me next chapter hopefully with my victims of my domain
Now… you dare cliffhanger me!?
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But what if I create my own Divine Artifacts in my Pocket Dimension hmm???
Only cost would probably be that it’s subpar compared to the whole thing. With the whole sentience thing and actual divinity in all of them. Think Gilgamesh vs Shirou. But think about the possibilities. What if I transported Starcraft kind of tanks 
This got me thinking though. Is the reason why your race has powers means that you can harness that energy as well in proportion to their population? Meaning that you cannot just create your own ability and have it in your world because it would be weak? And also, can you transport a person from your planet to your dimension? I’m curious about the possibilities given to this ability.
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yeah Batman is my Favorite too and his enemies always underestimate him because he dose not have powers until they find themselves in Arkham asylum dude fighted Superman 40 times he won 17 and Superman won 23 i know Superman won the most but the dude is a Human if you are a Human who won 17 times vs Superman with no powers and only your intelligence then you are OP
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Definitely necromancy for me
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I haven’t seen Batman or Superman for a long time, to be honest, but doesn’t Batman only defeat Superman by using his weakness, Kryptonite? I think that’s one of the reasons why Superman is one of the few who can face Doomsday, as Doomsday has no weakness. However, I could be wrong since I haven’t read comics in years, so I might be outdated.
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There are other ways but yeah kryptonite is usually the main thing that batman uses to win
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Thanks a lot, I’ve made the corrections and would upload them soon.
You do harness a slight power up from your creations with life, and the power up stacks the more they advance and grow in size.
Sorry but I don’t really understand the next question, but if you’re asking if you could transport someone from your planet to the outside world you normally live in, then the answer is no.
You can only bring them over to earth within the range of your domain. Once outside your domain the difference in dimensional wavelength would kill them.
Actually you’re wrong, batman has beating superman through other means like creating a doomsday virus in the comic (dark knights metal) and even trapping him in a room with red solar radiation and just straight up beating the shit out of him (during the soviet era).
Also without all this, I really don’t like when some superman fans say “take kryptonite out of the equation and Batman doesn’t stand a chance” because if you take the superhuman abilities out of superman he too would stand no chance against a disciplined martial artist like Batman.
I’m sorry if the text sounds a little rude or anything, honestly I mean no aggression, but reading back on what I wrote few people might think otherwise.
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Don’t worry, I didn’t see it as rude. The truth was that it was a very polite clarification of information for me. At least within what fits in an online publication. 
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That answered my questions, thanks! Guess I can see the limits of Pocket Dimension a bit and how Divine Arsenal can be used to any situation.
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Yeah they both have their limits, but neither of them has a limit that can’t be broken.
With a high enough core stability you can expand your domain to a 1 kilometre radius, with that much space on earth your creations can roam quite freely.
Also you shouldn’t be too worried about that seeing as they can always roam freely within your dimension, there shouldn’t be much of a reason to want to bring them out.
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Hey i have a question if you choose the pocket dimension power. Could you bring like a chair or food from your pocket dimension back to earth.
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This story is so good, I love how many superpowers we can choose and the different consequences too. Please don’t stop writing this masterpiece, I literally can’t stop replaying it.
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One question, why can’t I play chapter two? My game stops at the sandstorm scene and the assassination attempt.
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I believe chapter two is currently exclusive to the Divine Arsenal and Pocket Dimension powers.
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Yes you can, but like I said previously, it’ll only be available within your domain on Earth.
Thanks a lot for taking up time to play this IF.
Also, like I said when starting out. This IF would get more and more difficult down the line because of all the branching out, but I fully intend to finish this book (hell I’ve even planned ahead to the storyline of the second and final installment for this IF).
So believe me, as long as all is well I wouldn’t abandon my first IF (even if it might take a while before I’m done writing it).
Currently, it’s only available for the Divine Arsenal (public), Pocket Dimension (public) and Time manipulation (Patreon)
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