Ah…The most OP power that’s ever exsisted
Sounds cool, I like the concept
UPDATE! (13-7-20[This is the time in my timezone, your time may vary])
This was a MEATY update. I think I’ve made the story a LOT better, now.
Added prologue, and chapter 2, and parts of Chapter 3 (Technically 3 and 4 since I put the character creation as its own separate file in the chapters)
Removed flavour text that could be seen as racist
Gave pretentious titles to all the chapters
First encounter with the ROs
Clues about the MC’s backstory
Eat a pizza and relax
Maybe more ROs in the future?
If fans demand it, will give the characters funny accents.
Just realized, I should probably say that it was updated in the title.
If you try to choose you’re strength there is an error
Tried it myself, didn’t encounter a problem. I’ll repost the link, maybe that’ll solve it.
Try it again now.
Can’t wait for the results man
hellooo i love this demo so far! i was reading the ‘TODO’ and i read about adding accents to de characters?? what do you mean by that? what i mean, my first language is not english (i know there are many people here at the forum like me) and i don’t have any trouble reading english, adding accent to characters might do my (and others) reading more hard ?? sorry for the bad english and sorry if i sound mean
Basically, the thing is that this story is set in the UK, and one of the most famous parts about thw UK is the accents, so, I was thinking that I should add that, but, only if you guys demand it.
Wait what, I thought I fixed it? Gimme a sec.
Yeah, I definitely fixed the error. Maybe try again?
I tried it again and I still stuck with the error
It’s working fine for me. Maybe try this link?
I realized that if I choose I like men, the error will appear but if I choose I like women, the error won’t be there
I see it. Gimme a sec, I’ll fix it. I will not let you go without letting you scope out the dudes with hot abs.
Done. Try it again now.
just tried it! it’s nice and I really enjoyed it. can’t wait for more!
Found it, and fixed it, currently uploading now.
Done! Have fun with Zeke’s abs!