The 4th chapter was nice. Even though I sometimes get confused because of what is happening the story was entertaining.
How many chapters are going to be in the full game?
There were lots of typos, grammar errors and some coding errors…
‘unknown’ needs to be replaced with code. Whatever you choose to indicate male and female in the code, ‘himself’ and ‘herself’ is not identified when choosing our gender. That’s why it’s showing ‘unknown’.
That one was hell of an update. The little time jumps in the journey with Daelynn was a tad confusing but it was great overall. And I totally like Dae the most. She’s so fun!
@Sailendranath_Murmu The full game is going to around 14-20 chapters, depending on how writing goes. I have the outline in my head, but everything changes as I start writing, so I can’t give a definitive number.
I think I have fixed most of the typos/bugs, also the unknown error. It was not showing up when I playtested it, so I have no idea what the problem was, but I wrote in an extra line of code that I think fixed it. Here’s hoping!
@Baam Yeah, the Chapter was BIG! It should have probably been 2 chapters, but oh well! Also, when you say time jumps, you mean from when they leave the port and get to the outside of the cave? Yeah, I thought that people wouldn’t enjoy a step by step account of their traveling 
That’s why I fast-forwarded, lol!
Also, I’m super glad you like Daelynn! 
I adore her as well, but most people want to kill her! For shame!
'ello again, i was loading/saving a file and this happened
It run smoothly now 
NOOOO~ 
It’s so unfair! You are such a cliffhanger! 
Gotta say I had more of an attraction for the bandit on the road than for Morkai or Stransa any chance he might be coming back? Also I kind of got the feeling Morkai had a thing for Stransa but idk.
What!!! Why would anyone want to kill her? As far I know, she hasn’t done anything wrong, not yet anyway. And besides… without her you would be dead right now. And she is not an asshole like someone we all know.
Gaaaaah!!! I love this story so much!!! The story is definitely unlike anything I have read lately, and has me so damned hooked - cannot WAIT to grab it when it comes out…great job 
About Mordekai and Strassa, @Morgan_V wrote that a few weeks ago;
I really love writing about my two boys! And no, they are not together, though they are feelings between them that are of the non-platonic variety. But they value their friendship too much to ever act on it, so best friends it is. The MC can have a poly with both of them though! All three of them together! Or you can pursue their individual romances, whichever strikes your fancy😉
@Morgan_V
Just let me kiss Daelynn already!!
It not end of demo bug I got those choice did all of them I think this happened right now of this bug 
@Sailendranath_Murmu I know, right?! She’s such a good girl!
@Redway_bull I’m sorry but the bandit was a fling No more bandit smooches 
@Jender Aaaaah! THANK YOU! I can’t wait to write it, trust me! The fantasy I’ve always wanted!
@Freja Thank you so much for answering that for me! I was going to go look into the depths of my tumblr to find the post myself, but you did it for me!
@Chopper AHAHAHAHAHA! Don’t like the interrupted kiss trope?! To be honest, as a reader I hate it, but I am sadistic as a writer, so… Worry not though, Daelynn is the one you can kiss the soonest 
@wanamingo Oh, dear, there’s a typo in there! How embarrassing! 
But yeah, I’m seriously having so much fun with the polys! I hope Falk enjoyed having two pretty bois fawning over him
@Bahamuht @Kaylo342 Yeah, I updated some bugs, and this got bungled somehow, sorry. It’s fixed now!
@Takashi_Shin Yeah, the bug is a recent thing, oops. I fixed it though! Hope the chapter your good enough for a birthday read! 
I have a very important question for ya…O weaver of Tales…
I just saw something and I’m DYING to know…
Hide behind the 2 guys during the sirens attack
Just what kind of CLASS is that ?! TELL ME SO MY LIFE WILL FEEL FUFILLED AT LAST! 
The “I’M STILL LEVEL ONE ” class! Every game should have one! You can even sit out the fight in Chapter 4!
I don’t know, the thought of an MC that’s a wuss and then gets to have a legendary soul stone weapon that they don’t know how to hold just cracks me up!
I should give it a name of its own! Maybe… CRYPHER! (like a cipher that takes one look into the opponent’s thoughts and then runs for the hills crying!)
Don’t you mean level Zero ? everyone know at Level 1 , you got armor and weapon and you are killing Goblins
the mc is level zero…all they do is hide and make face behind someone ass
waittttt…let me do that! I refuse to be a wuss without being a pain in the ass at the same time !
@E_RedMark Oh man, can you imagine always pissing Morkai off and talking big and when the time comes the MC is like “nope!”
Morkai’s forehead vein would pop right off! 
