add to it ALOT of clumsinness to make him completely miserable…and you got yourself a deal! 
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@E_RedMark 
That’s actually a WONDERFUL idea! HOW didn’t I think of that before?! Now I have to put an option like that somewhere, DAYUM!
Morkai -1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000!
PS:
@E_RedMark Fixed it!
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you are missing more 0000000000 in there dear , be a real renegade ! 
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@honey_milk I tried looking for a bug, but couldn’t find anything? Does it still not play for you? Please let me know!
Also, I’m so happy you’re excited! I’m excited too! Let’s romance that redheaded grouchy man!
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@Morgan_V I’d LOVE to be a beta tester! I’m so flattered! Thank you so much <3
And tonight I swear I’m going to complete the demo. I was supposed to be free today but life was like “Haha, NOPE”.
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One of the first things I check out in a COG is the stats screen even before creating a character and just the fact that I can see there is an option to have some sort of mule means am already hyped up for the game.
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Found some bugs, cirkels around the word that’s spelled wrong. Crossed through is that the scentence doesnt read quite right. Sorry for bothering if you already corrected some of the bugs 
If you seek beta testers and bug correctors in the future, don’t hesitate to ask me 
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well it only happens when i load for the first time, when i do it again it was fine =)
also more bugs 
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AHHHH! I love chapter 4! Daelynn’s fun. She seems to be as over the top as Morkai (must be why there’s friction between them). Straasa and Morkai are so sweet and protective with the MC.
Though I kind of wanted to slap the bullshit out of Morkai for pretty much calling my MC useless in fights. Who was the one throwing cinders in the assassins’ eyes back at Shar’s Port? Who warned everyone of the sirens before they were attacked and who fought off those same sirens by using arcane fury? Hint: It sure wasn’t Morkai.
I think pretty much all the typos and grammar mistakes I noticed have already been pointed out but I did come across one continuity issue.At the beginning of chapter three, you choose how the MC reacts to barely escaping Shar’s Port. I chose “This isn’t over is it?” The MC zones out and Morkai jokes about shaking the MC to snap them out of their funk. Two of the options (the one about the cold shower and the one about the bucket) don’t match what happened.
Summary
You feel… as if you are being guided toward some unknown goal. That you were meant to find these men, that everything is happening for a reason. You need to believe that all this injustice, all this senseless torture you’ve endured is not simply the Gods’ cruel sense of humor.
Because if it is, then you’re not sure if you can keep doing this. Keep running, keep fighting, keep trying. Yet that place deep inside of you, the place that has nothing to do with logic, rationalization or facts, that place that consists of nothing but primal awareness , it tells you that Morkai and Straasa are important.
When you met them this morning, you were sure that after this boat is over, you would never see them again. Yet now, as you sit silently between them, a weird sort of tranquility infuses you and you no longer think that is the case. Today is not the the last you’ll ever see of them.
“You’re very quiet,” Straasa remarks in a soft voice.
“Maybe we should grab and shake him a bit. That’ll wake him up for sure. Here, I’ll do it.”
Morkai threateningly holds out his hand, as if to grab you, but Straasa slaps it down without a moment’s hesitation.
“No,” he commands sternly, his own hand reaching out lightning quick, and he grabs one of Morkai’s long locks, separating it from the redheads ponytail.
He then tugs , a sharp little motion that looks entirely too practiced. The green-eyed man doesn’t even bat an eyelid, simply grabs his own hair and pulls it away from Straasa’s reach, almost like an afterthought, putting over the shoulder that is closest to you. His eyes are still fixed upon you.
Response: “You know, that cold shower might actually help after all…” you tell him kiddingly.
Response: “You should go get that bucket for yourself,” you answer him nastily.
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IM FANNING SO HARD OVER THESE NEW SCENES WITH MY BOYS!!! {SAVE ME LADS!}… and did anyone else read that “smat” as “smart” with a bad jersey accent? Or am I just weird? 
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I’ve also complied some new gifs for certain comments I have on new scenes… I hope y’all enjoy
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@MoSalahscores The mule is the reason everyone is playing this, I knew it as a good decision putting her in!
@Emmelienxd Thank you so much for the bug finding! And for the offer! I may just take you up on that!
@honey_milk Pheww, good to know, fewer bugs for me to worry about! Also, thanks for spotting those! It’s greatly appreciated! 
@SamCornick Thanks for pointing out the continuity issue! I have fixed it, along with all the other corrections! (Also, yes, Morkai is being a jerk. You can address this later on though!)
@Waywalkerlover “{SAVE ME LADS!}” Ahahahahaaha! It feels good to have them running around after you, doesn’t it?! 
The poly is gaining some traction, I love it! Also, I’m still waiting on my gifs
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the mule need a cape…
we all know…at the end of the day…she be the one saving everyone from evil!
better yet…
Morkai: What are you doing? Hey! Thats mine!
Mc: 
now it’s mah Dolores (mule)!
Morkai: Give it back you little shit!
Mc: She get cold ! She need it moarrrr!
Morkai: GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! (Go SSJ)
Mule duck him in the groan
Morkai turn into Krilin
Ding Ding Ding! Morkai owned by super mule : 1
Shit! now I’m imagining Straasa like Ghost nappa! Pssst Morkaiiiiiii , Psssssst! 
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My god i already love these characters
Cant wait for the full release this has alot of potential to be great
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my gosh if this game isn’t the greatest thing I’ve read like, action? check. characters? check. sass but also softness? check check. backstory? CHECK. I’m guiltily admitting I’ve played this game for the uptenth time and tried all combinations possible in my shipping quest because who’s not to FAWN over like??? wow. not gonna lie you got me there at the triangle possibility and it’s the kind of thing if well done is pure hell and heaven, and heck if your way of writing doesnt greaty hint is gonna be amazing. awesome plot and characters, thank you so much for writing this.
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@Bloodhawkereaper Thank you! I hope the game will live up to your expectations! Also, I love your avatar, Sypha rocks!
@MissRagdoll THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TRYING IT! Your praise waters my barren heart, I can’t even tell you how much it means to hear people say that they like my story and characters! Though, there won’t be a triangle but a poly relationship. All three will end up together, heh. Hope that’s not disappointing to you!
On another note, I have updated the demo, fixed the bugs reported, all the typos and even the continuity errors! I even changed the Manerkol scene for those that try to skip the questions entirely, it says something different than before! A bunch of other stuff too!
Thank you all for your help, and if you find anything else, please don’t hesitate to let me know!
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I will gladly lay down my life for this game I will protect it no matter what. this is a masterpiece that deserves nothing but praise. I applaud you dear author
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@Kaylo342 THANK YOU! To get such devotion is humbling, hahaha! My game got its very own knight!
Sweeeet! I appreciate your kind words and praise so much!
Bless you! 
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You guys know that once you’re outside the cane and have to choose out of the three options, every option leads to completely different scenes with completely different interactions and romance scenes, right?
RIGHT?!
Why do you think it took me so long to write this thing? I wrote three different variations of every romance scene for all of them!
That was an INSANE amount if work! And a lot of content for you to explore! The scenes are very different and so are the RO’s reactions!
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Yup
This good book
Me loves the elf
Elf great
Me grateful 
hard work
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