@bumfuzzle lol actually I’ve never used that feature yet when it comes to the forum replys or don’t think I have useally just @ who ever I want to make sure I want to get the message… As for the breakfast scene haven’t noticed a problem there but yeah it’s the moment we enter the suite and we have 4 options I think it was that it would loop back too. When I get a chance I will start to play again and see if it pops back up so I can hopefully give you a closer area to look at.
@Valixon Someone else said they looped back too, from the meditation scene and that they were using the saves to see all possible outcomes. I will try to look more into it later when I have a clearer mind!
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When there are 6 ROs but I’m only interested in Elijah…
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Well I wouldn’t mind a shot at his partner Luke myself. 
And I suppose it might be my imagination but River doesn’t click for me anymore like he used to.
Fortunately dragon boy seems to be as vibrant as ever…although there seem to be no consequences for getting a negative first impression of him at his bookstore event. 
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I just can’t wait too pick a familiar lol. Probably something weird like the pet fish he used too have
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i had to double check how many the ros were cause damn it felt like i was meeting twelve people. doesnt help that im bad with names. on a more brighter note though, matias is such a sweetheart? like hello? i was going for chai/akira cause they seemed like a flirt but that stuff toy tugged at my heart strings and now im conflicted.
but luke kinda? i mean im willing to drop everyone for him or if i cant romance him maybe ill just make it my sole mission to make him genuinely smile.
also i am so confused, are we nonmagical or magical? a little overwhelming with the whole dorm meet up set up ngl. i couldnt keep up with everywhere and i suddenly just got confused them from one another, like my mc just wants to go to his room.
havent finished but will be restarting from fresh cause ive met all the ros and just realized i havent flirted with any of them at all.
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Not yet, in a possible future scene it’ll be mentioned. Probably not as awful as you’d think though, since it’ll just be like a ‘oh yeah I thought you were an asshole at first’. Similar to how I keep track of some reactions to see how MC’s feelings towards some characters change over time.
Do you mean the description of the dorm? I just put that there for people who want to picture the dorm but it doesn’t matter if it’s missed. If you mean the first three chapters are overwhelming: that’s a little bit on purpose. MC’s entire first two days on the cloud are dizzying and overwhelming. In a future revision, I might make it less overwhelming if it’s too much for readers but as of the moment it will stay like this.
Magical. Emerald heavily implies it in chapter 1 and Elijah confirms it near the start of Chapter 2.
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@bumfuzzle – Akira has a lot of pronoun switches all through the dorm scenes. For example:
This type of switch happens more than once and it might be adding to other reader’s confusion.
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Oh yeah, I’m still trying to get all their pronouns correctly coded since I just recently made them gender flippable. I think River has a lot, too. The testers and I have gone through it for a week but it’s tough catching every single one with that much written. Thank you for pointing this one out.
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Normally, I just said everyone pronouns with a variable, instead of writing individual, he, she, etc. Granted that’s only because at this point I’ve kind of just gone to muscle memory right variables. If that helps?
ah no, i think its them talking/arguing/fighting about stef’s death but i think its ment to be like that? i think with the amount of people on one place and all of them talking is a little harder to keep up.
also i think there are more confident or outspoken flirting and little to no flustered options. im kinda stumped when i think most? of the flirt options are outward specially on when matias gives the toy to you.
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Is the mc a god or a normal human??
I think they’re part god part magical creature. I think that’s what they said steph was, maybe we are too? We probably won’t know for at least a chapter or two.
Finished all in one go, I really liked the story and especially some dialogue options regarding MC (it’s hard to explain but it makes me all giggly when I found games with MC options that just click with me/my version of MC 
)
A couple of my favorite ones (only chose the first two):
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It’s because in the first draft River was exclusively he/him and Akira exclusively she/her and I changed them to flippable when the second draft was ready to be sent to the testers (I was conflicted at first) so I had to go back to change them all to variables. I think the next chapters won’t have too many problems with pronouns since I also write with variables.
Oh, yeah, that is intentional.
Matias’ scene was intentionally more flirty and outward because Matias is a receiver and I couldn’t see an MC who is also shy flirting with a stranger like that. But if I find a way, I’ll add more shy choices in that specific scene in the future. Other romance scenes have shy or sweet choices as default.
Those were some of the most fun I had writing this draft! I’m glad you liked them!
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oh i see! that’s a shame. guess ill go for akira or chai instead
On the relationships page under the character it says that they are alive. Does that mean that depending on the choices some of them will or could be killed?
Matias’ other scenes have choices that are more sweet or more shy! It was just that specific instance. And I might add some more shy choices there in the future once I think of them!
No ROs will be killed this book but yes!
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So wait how evil/efficiency pragmatic 
can the mc be some options that increase godly already makes them sounds like a lawful evil jerk
That tells you a lot about the Golden doesnt it