After playing Dragons and Broadsides, a while back, I found these games really enjoyable. Then I saw the new games and got really interested. Now I am making my own!
The game is set around a race which takes part in Peru. You compete with a (chosen) partner against couples from other countries (similar to the Amazing Race). So far I have done the character creation section and the first scene. All the other scenes have been planned.
Does this sound like a game that would be appealing?
I agree with Communist Sam. Most people like CoG because of the quality and fun of the games. If you want your story to be really successful give lots of options have good dialogue and descriptions. Pull us in and do not let us go from your world. Take your time and have fun with it!!
I have a demo ready for you to look at. Please let me know what you think - the more feedback the better (positive and negative). There are a few obvious errors, which I will iron out as I go. Also, play the demo several times as there are a lot of different routes to explore.
Hmm, reminded me of the old cyoa books where you basically have brutal endings…except unlike with a book, you can’t flick back and change your choice! Nice set up though, it’s interesting to see where this will go!
That was weird I expected more but ohh well. Did not see any issues in the begging it just felt like it was about to get good than boom. I am dead and the demo is over. It has a great hook you seem to be doing a good job I think you should add a companion Who is quick and charismatic.
Querida, I like that idea and I will consider it. However I’m not sure if it would be good to start guessing how your friend would act… Perhaps I’ll save this idea for a future game. At the moment I’m working on building the backgrounds for the three partners - they need more character.