I just also want to say this is one of the most in-depth reviews/bits of criticism that I’ve ever received . thank you @GoldenSilver!
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again, more in-depth thoughts about my story. Thank you @Malachi_Joseph ! Stuff like this is incredibly invaluable! I can only make a better story with the help and reviews of you all. So thank you again . These are some good points I will try to look at .
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So where is that link?
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it’ll be present when the next chapter is ready for upload
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hey gang 
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Lol this sounds sus…
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gonna send to my coder soon 🥸
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and remember this “update” will actually be a new link and not a actual update either . it’s a rewriting of the first couple of chapters for the sake of it being 3ish years old and needs a facelift . the new chapter is being worked on but the rewriting of the beginning chapters takes precedence!
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MC has the military background. I think that you add branches of the military. It is just my opinion, but it is up to you.
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So how’s russiagate going for you lmao…
Hahahaha.
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i wouldn’t mind adding diff branches of the military but it would be purely cosmetic and wouldn’t have any sorta impact on the way the story progresses … unless I find a way to make it tie into the story somehow
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I’m looking forward to the cute moments with my partner and kids 
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happy almost valentine’s day 
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It’s five more days (lol my wedding anniversar(ies)y too)… Advanced happy valentine’s day to you too, wish you a great time.
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attempting to find a coder, jus spoke to a person on the dev team . not dead but it’s trending that way 
no promises tho i made that mistake last time .
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