I just also want to say this is one of the most in-depth reviews/bits of criticism that I’ve ever received . thank you @GoldenSilver!
again, more in-depth thoughts about my story. Thank you @Malachi_Joseph ! Stuff like this is incredibly invaluable! I can only make a better story with the help and reviews of you all. So thank you again . These are some good points I will try to look at .
So where is that link?
it’ll be present when the next chapter is ready for upload
Hey @Spyder do you got the goods we’ve been waiting for?
Lol this sounds sus…
gonna send to my coder soon 🥸
and remember this “update” will actually be a new link and not a actual update either . it’s a rewriting of the first couple of chapters for the sake of it being 3ish years old and needs a facelift . the new chapter is being worked on but the rewriting of the beginning chapters takes precedence!
MC has the military background. I think that you add branches of the military. It is just my opinion, but it is up to you.
So how’s russiagate going for you lmao…
i wouldn’t mind adding diff branches of the military but it would be purely cosmetic and wouldn’t have any sorta impact on the way the story progresses … unless I find a way to make it tie into the story somehow
I’m looking forward to the cute moments with my partner and kids
happy almost valentine’s day
It’s five more days (lol my wedding anniversar(ies)y too)… Advanced happy valentine’s day to you too, wish you a great time.
attempting to find a coder, jus spoke to a person on the dev team . not dead but it’s trending that way no promises tho i made that mistake last time .
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