hmmm send me the screenshots, and I’ll fix it
hiiii, found this! my mc’s a guy by the way uwu
Summary
It was strange looking at a man who was a gorgeous mash of the two people he loved most. He was taken aback for a moment when he saw her. He’d never thought in his wildest dreams that the 7 days old baby he had held in his arms, would grow up to be this attractive.
it would also appear in the other choices, though instead of her, the girl would appear.
I liked the story and the characters, but i have a minor advice, because i know you want feedback 
there is a lot of the verb “say” in every sentence before a character speaks, and sometimes is not even necessary, since it is clears who is speaking.
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I loved the update, we finally get a chance to interact with T!! Yay!! I chose to have them as Tric and the scene where you blush is just chef’s kiss
I am curious about the MCs bio dad’s age. When Sergeant T was telling the story he said the dad was 22 years old and that happened 18 years ago. Which would put him at 40 right now. The MC is 24 does that mean he was 16 when she was born?
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You had me at romance heavy, then further intrigued me by that weird mix of movies that influenced the story lol, and kept me when I saw multiple ROs are over 6’!
That last memory Tric has of when he first met MC is too adorable, especially when he calls the baby grumpy (or was it cranky???).
I feel like I’m missing something when it comes to why MC is such a potential threat so I can’t wait to read more and connect the dots lol
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Yikes I forgot about that, I’ll fix that
Mmmm, no The MC’s bio dad was 23 when the MC was born. The MC was born on the day that the war ended, but then something happened after that, which I am not going to tell you cause it’s a spoiler. Now the MC was 18 during chapter 2 when the court trial happened. In chapter 3 they are 21 years old and in chapter 4 they are 24 about to become 25 in a few months. So that puts the dad’s age at 47 or 46.
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Ah,inspired by AoT? I am a huge fan of the series! Looking forward to future updates.
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This update was amazing. I loved the flashback of Tracy with mc.
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AOT feels! Yay!!
I’ll definitely bookmark this.
I like the way you write shy MC route. Daw thanks 
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Remember, to be very careful with your choices in the first four chapters, as in chapter 5 the storyline is based on your skill stats. If you make the wrong choices, it will affect you…it’s basically karma. What goes around comes around. 
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ROMANCE! Sign me up!
Though… your very first post here is just…toooooooo looooooong
It works like this( ꈍᴗꈍ)
Yahaha! You find me!
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Does the ‘temperament’ stats affects some success check? Or is it just how you interact with others instinctively?I personally sure hope I don’t have to play as ‘one-dimensional MC’ to succed in a certain choice.
Thanks for that. I just crawled out from underneath my rock, and saw the world of COG
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Nah, its just how interact with the others. Look you are you and people can either love you the way you are or fu@ o#. You be you, but remember karma is a real bi5w5.
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When we select our skill set during military academy we only got 1 instead of 4 . Is that supposed to happen or it’s a error??
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Meaning?