Yup, the last selection for the 4 stats is like that and remember that the stats you choose now will affect the rest of your book experience
So basically my speed stats which is at 36 is not useful for rest of the book? And at what percent the stats should be to work perfectly?
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Completed the new demo…Man this became one of my favourite wips. All the character arcs are interesting and fun to read. Can’t wait for the next demo…
Typo:
I believe you typed in MC_name variable instead of horse_name variable here…
I’mma end with this…
Knock knock…
Who’s there?
YOU’RE IN THE ARMY NOW!!!
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Mmm no you do get chances to increase your stats in the later chapters but be careful in what choice you make in the fight scenes because your rep and life both depend on the choices you make…so stick to your strengths
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I really like the story and enjoyed reading through it <3
Some things I just wanna point out:
- The character names and surnames that sound closely with each other can sometimes get confusing.
- the dialogue is sometimes hard to read because of their arrangement (sorry for the lack of better word, lol) but it could be just me.
Will be looking forward to this, I love militaristic stories which involves young adults, hehehe reminds me of Ender’s Game and the sort.
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I am loving this book. The new update was amazing
What a turn of events! 
This game is getting more interesting the more I read it. Also, I finally got to meet Major T! Yay! I liked them by reading their biography. 
Edit: When I was choosing my skills, I chose tactical skills as the second last option, but when I looked at the stats lore was increased not tactics. Basically, I was the worst in lore is what I wanted to say, but instead of it I became the worst in tactical skills, even though I chose tactical skills over lore in the last choice.
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I meant to say this, Thank you for creating gender flippable ROs. Now if we want to romance someone from a specific gender we can flip the other ROs gender so it won’t be hard to choose.
After reading the ROs description I was having rather difficulty to Choose between Alice and Ashlyn😅
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Well happy belated birthday 
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Please say this is first book in a series.
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Yes, this is the first book in a series
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I kind of wanted to troll, and just say yes, this is the first book in the series, even though I have no idea. But, too late now. Though, I am happy that this is the first book in the series.
Because that one post requested someone say, “yes, this book is in a series.
Also, there’s aviation, so airplanes. Why are you taking the horses to get it Academy. How does that work? What are the big nasty as come after like engines and things or something?
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There is no tech in this world, it runs on fossil fuels and no airplanes, these are very small bomber planes type and run on steam, think of it as a bit steampunk with cannons and stuff with switchblades and extendable shields
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I just stumbled into this story and it has interesting premise. I haven’t finished the whole demo yet but I just want to address one issue that I’ve noticed. It’s the flow of how the story is written.
One example is this paragraph that consists of only one sentence. I got confused as I read it without a pause. It’ll be better to break it into several sentences.
Similar issue with this paragraph. It should be a suspenseful moment but due to the way it was written, the suspense is missing. It’ll be better to separate some parts into several lines instead of cramming them all in one paragraph, imo.
There are other paragraphs with similar issues.
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Its an interesting presmise and one I will definitely have my eye on! I have my eye in a few of the ROs and I aloreciate being able to pick the gender as we meet them! Some of the names are confusing at first (they’re so similar!) but the further in I got the more I was able to remember who was who. I cannot wait to see where this goes especially after seeing the influences haha!
Like many others my issue is the flow of the story but that can be fixed with help from others so I’m not too worried about it causing issues with the potential of this story.
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hmmm, I know. That’s another issue I am working on. My writing is sticky and hard to read. It’s included in the next update with Chapter 4 and 5.
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Yeah, I don’t really have much of an imagination when it comes to names, if you have a few diverse suggestions, Im all ears.
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No worries. I’m sure people here will help you.
hi! im getting an error when i try to play it 
“Uncaught Error: chapter1 line 814: label ‘gh’ already defined on line 789”
(im not on my cellphone, so maybe the problem is only on the web version? since i can see people are playing normaly)
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I tried it on mobile, still doesn’t work tho, maybe it’s a bug?