The concept of the book sounds good. However, is it just me, or when I try to play it, my device has a temper tantrum? It’s not reading anything between the reload button, on the toolbar on the other end of the page.
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The problem is that the image took far too long to load so I removed it and will be adding it later, The demo should load now and I also changed the ROs Gender option to choose when you meet them. 
. A shout out to the people who helped me out with the issues, thank you so much.
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@Varyn_Ashyver_closed when will you add the save and load system?
In is part of the story, the gang confrontation, the scene is added twice.
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Okay this was the best story I’ve ever read I’m not going to lie it was beautiful in my eyes it was a good read and I hope you keep on going
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Man 
you just made my day
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I will be adding the save system in the next update, so you will have to wait my good person.
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@Varyn_Ashyver_closed I absolutely hate cliffhangers. Why you do this? Why!!! 
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That fffing cliffhanger…I really enjoyed the story and loved how you provided a detailed encyclopedia in the stats page. As someone pointed out, it takes infinite load when I select “The Geography of Sienna”. And also…
1.Is Aline in the prologue supposed to be MC’s mother?
2.Not to be sexist,but I think it’s bride inplace of bridegroom.
Can’t wait for the next update.
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Yeah hon about the letter part, you have to guess, it’s a spoiler and you will find out later in the story
About the bridegroom, Sir Nicholas is gay. 
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Cause your reaction is hilarious 
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So how old is the MC, cause most of the ROs seem like their in there late 20s and early 30s besides the best friend? Gonna be a little weird with an 18 year old MC imo.
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Lets just say that our MC is a caterpillar soon to be a butterfly
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Hope that’s in age and not in experience lol.
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Demos short but its good, left me hanging with the arrest part, thou I noticed that the intro I or the MC is actually a boy? But then after some backstory I get to choose my gender is that supposed to happen too?
Also the adopted parents part … I get to choose my looks but when I read the MCs mother facial description it matches mine, or maybe thats just a coincidence lol anyways … Its a great 1st chapter hope u keep it commin and won’t encounter writers block or somethin CHEERS
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What a badass characters you got here dear author and I love it!!! 
I’m soo looking forward for next update 
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I’m sorry I didn’t mean to be sexist but that 15m long veil raised that doubt in me.
Okay, so I just read the demo and my reaction was: “WTF?!”. Literally. Why are we being punished for something we have not done? That damn Cruger, if it’s his work, he is gonna get such a nasty payback from me. I’m gonna make him suffer.
Anyways, not talking about that bastard, the game in overall was really good but too short to my liking. Maybe that’s because I got immersed in the last scene so much that I didn’t want it to end so soon. Good luck!
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Sometimes in demos the MC will have a default gender, name and etc. until such options appear. So it should be okay. Also, about the appearance, I think that it’s just coincidence, just imagine that you and your parents do not resemble each other regardless of your hair color. There are some games though that include different variations of parents’ appearance based on your MC’ looks. I met at least one of such games, but writing them takes more time and effort.
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Seems interesting so far… I will watch this closely
I’m going to assume that the prologue was from the captain, who is now a hero?
Also. Never seen someone knife themselves accidentally/on purpose before. Funzies.
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