Sorry about that! Extra space that shouldn’t have been there, it should be fixed now.
Oh no R got hot 
the love triangle is going to tear my heart out I can’t even choose who to ride with 
all this jealousy and pining is giving me so much life tho it hurts so good 
Super intrigued with everything revealed in this update, really want to learn more about the raven court the name alone sounds cool as hell and whatever it is we forgot in those months sounds juicy 
and I’m so glad Josie is coming along with us she’s such a fun character!
I didn’t encounter any glitches in my playthroughs so nothing to report other than that I really enjoyed the update and am looking forward to the next one 
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Thanks for the update 
I was laughing so hard that I woke up my sister 
It’s a late night, so tomorrow morning (later this day) I’m gonna be chewed up by my sister. Anyways, that was full of fun and laughter to me, especially with Josie 
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Love this.
Some minor typos, but nothing too serious. A couple instances of words being written twice in a row. Also, as a general grammar rule, the first letter of a word in quotations is capitalized when it’s the start of a complete sentence, even if following a comma. Not a big deal and doesn’t impact how things read at all, but just in case you want to fix those things.
I’m torn between all these ROs lol. They all have some interesting personalities so I can’t pick. Good for replayability, bad for me when I feel bad for picking one over the other
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Thank you so much! It’s always nerve-wracking to post an update so I’m thrilled you enjoyed it 
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Phew, I’m really glad you liked the update! I don’t have a tumblr, I just don’t think I’d do it justice 
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Heh heh, I’ve been so excited to write R’s hotness. The cinnamon roll is a whole damn 12-pack of Cinnabon’s now 
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Same. R is so sensitive when Nax gets picked over R, it kills me to write the reaction 
I absolutely want to fix those things, I don’t know why quotes are such a thorn in my side, I know the rules but somehow never follow them lol. Thank you so much for bringing up the typos/mistakes, I’ll definitely comb through this to correct the errors! I’m soooo happy you are enjoying the ROs, you don’t know how happy I am that you like more than one or two. Thank you!
I’m really glad you enjoyed the humor! But be wary of making sisters angry, trust me, Josie is based on my own sister so I have experience in this field
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R got hot and jacked lol.
This was a little weird considering we just met before and my MC still didn’t really trust them.
And how old were the ROs and MC before and how old are they now, it mentions Nax being older than before. Also was Nax already interested in the MC like Raya?
And maybe it’s just me, but I hope Josie isn’t a permanent part of the group. Her overly aggressive manor is already starting to get old quickly. Wanna send this 16 year old back to their parents.
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Josie’s got some creative insults up her sleeve and I am enjoying every second of it.
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I just found this, and wow. I adore R (though I’m kind of sad that the awkward kid turned into a hunk), and while my MC does find Nax hot, I’m getting less interested the more I get to know them.
I was actually kind of surprised when R showed up, because I thought G was R initially. They just seemed to have very similar descriptions. Glad to know that G is a romance option as well!
I will also add my comment to say that I enjoy Josie so far. 
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Sure, sisters can be scary sometimes.
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New update is really cool! I love how torn my Mc is between BFF/Prince(ss)
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Loved it and definitely will buy the full game once it’s released. You have some mistakes made when describing Nax, my MC was female with female LIs but Naxs gender pronouns were mixed between he and she.
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Alfbjaaobekqosqnaodjdgbwhwjabd this is so good I’m super excited to see where this goes!!
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So…
Am I the only one who can see all the romance options forming a group to be with the MC like a harem?
Replayed for the update and I like how touchy Nax is.
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Totally see it
Let us not discuss “harem” options. No, really.
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okay, i was just teasing but now that I think about it that was probably not a good idea 
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First of all I want to say that your game is 
Amazing from the idea of story to each dialogue. I love it 
(even the angst that love triangle BFF/Royal creates)
But at the end of the first chapter when MC ask “Who is going?”… and player asks Nax he says “Okay. I’m really not fond of this plan but we’ll do it. Rayf, you take the girl and the Raven, MC, you come with me. We can talk more on the way to the safe house, if that’s alright with you.” end in the next choice is with whom you wanna go and when you choose Nax - MC states "I will go with Nax. " as if someone ask specific question as “Who do you want to go with?” which for me is kinda awkward because there was a conversation before. it’s not that big of deal just some cosmetics but I’m just letting you know
overall you’re fantastic writer and I cannot wait for next update
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huh, one thing i noticed is that nax and kaz get detailed gender-specific descriptions at some point, while r just gets a vague neutral description both in the prologue and when they’re supposedly all grown up. kinda makes their new appearance seem more tell than show if ya ask me. not too much of a big thing, but might as well point it out.
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I know this is romance focused, but is there not going to be an aro option? Even if there’s not going to be, unless it’s somehow biologically impossible for a Sidhe to be aromantic, it’d be nice to have a line that says “lines on neither for for those interested in neither”.
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I think there’s a choice to not be interested in sexual relationships in the beginning of the demo?