asexual is not the same as aromantic.
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When I read the post my brain autocorrect to aromantic, sorry 
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Just finished reading the demo. I’ve clicked on this wip a few times in the past but decided against reading it. Im really glad I finally decided to read it. Your writing is really fun and interesting. Also, Josie is so far my favorite character, Im looking forward go seeing where this goes.
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Omg I have so much love for this story. Idk why but Kaz is the one who piqued my romantic interest the most! I just about lost it when he walked in with the pug, it’s so hilarious! Josie is still badass and I’m just completely in love with everything about this WIP.
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LISTEN. A PUG? A german shepherd or pit bull or husky or something, I understand. But how did his dragon end up becoming a PUG!
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I figure it’s just for comedic affect. Or maybe Grim missed being small so she could be toted around.
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How come I only just run into this?
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The MC is 17 in Faerie. R is 16, k is 17 N is 19. They are all 23 in our world. N is interested to start for spoiler reasons, but will back off if no interest is given. R is more than interested, has feelings. This will take a bit more rejection than N to make R move on.
Agree, I’m planning on beefing this up, just haven’t settled on the final description.
I hope so, I’d like to include it and have coding in place, but I want to make sure i can carry it off before I advertise it. Much like a potential poly romance, I’m saving space for it but not committing yet. Need to make sure I can write it in a satisfying way before I commit, but it’s on the sketchboard.
Heh heh, funny you should say husky. That’s all I’m saying for spoiler reasons.
Thank you! I hope you got a laugh if nothing else
I’m so glad! Kaz is more popular than I thought, makes me happy 
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I was being really dense and tired when I played through this for the first time, so I didn’t understand the whole Farros being Nax situation. Second time I played through it everything clicked in my brain and I went “ohhhhh…that makes a lot of sense.” 
I didn’t realize how oblivious I could get until now!
Overall, this WIP was very enjoyable 
I’d have to say the transition, where the MC was now in the human world and the characters all met up, made me a bit overwhelmed because so much was already happening in such a short period of time. Would’ve hoped for a little more build up before another bang in the story for that part. I’m not the best at giving critiques, but that was how it felt for me 
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Yay! I’m excited for a bisexual aro option!
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Honestly, it got me, too. But in a good way. Going back, and rereading while paying attention to “Farros’” behaviour, and reactions is really interesting to see. The level of interest goldie-wings* has for the MC is surprisingly unsubtle on a second pass when you know what’s up. 
*I’ve quietly joked to myself about them all being ‘primary colors’. Blue, Red and Yellow, while the MC has a choice between ‘neutral colors’ in White, Black, and Silver. I doubt the colors mean anything special, but it’s interesting that the three of them are as vivid as parrots (with nicely distinct personalities to match), while the MC reflects their status as a partial ‘blank slate’ with these more neutral options. 
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I had to read it twice too because I tend to read things quickly and it doesn’t register the first time around.
Also I approve of the Pug choice. A ferocious dragon turning into a tiny, snorting, curled tail cutie is adorable.
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Tbh the first time I played I was like “dude you sound and act like you’re talking about yourself… wait a minute… IS it you…?” When he got called out then to step out from the shadows I was like “yep, it totally was himself he talked about”.
Especially if your MC reacted negatively on the little hologram, his reaction was just too suspicious LOL
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Loooove this!
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My cup of tea of course. All RO’s trying to get to mc, no matter who is the lucky person mc chooses. The non consensual kiss, I liked it. I admit that cought be off guard. Plus the possessiveness, the main reason I love this work so much. The writing and plot is for me extraordinary and I didn’t forget you actually wrote all RO’s so detailed, so descriptive. You deserve many many kudos from me for that.
I’ll be glad to see the end of this piece of awesomeness.
(I apologise for my bad English:>)
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This was so much fun! This love triangle is gonna kill me though. Adorable best friend and bratty royalty are like my favorite RO archetypes, why would you do this to me?!? I will probably pick R but it will be so hard!!! G is also adorable and I totally thought they were R, so lol. Anyways, really enjoying this and I adore all the ROs although like I said, this love triangle will kill me.
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Please make a tumblr so we can share and you will inevitably get more fans! Also a Ko-Fi or Patreon so I can give you money to keep writing! I haaaaave to have this story. 
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Gosh where has this wip been all my life?? I love how you wrote each of the characters and the lore in this story! And the part where all the colorful cursing starts coming was too hilarious! I loved it and can’t wait to see more!
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This was seriously so good! I am in love with all the Ros and the writing. The reunion scene actually got me kinda emotional. Can’t wait to see where this is going 
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oh god THAT WAS SO FUNNY! I love the ROs!
Lol Tyler…he tried
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