Is the option to see Smelly fixed or am I doing something wrong?
@honeymichie Gosh, XD I’m loving the reactions when you pay as a boy. It’s fun that there is slight differences in how characters act when you are a boy or girl. Since I notice people let you get away with more crap as a girl or in one case won’t hit you because you are one, while the boy, you can’t get away with a lot. XD But then you can shock people by picking things like hair pens. xDD (Which in one play-though in my head I keep picturing my male MC being a big sweetie and instead of keeping his manly yellow Ribbon he gives it to Amber latter since he feels bad she got hurt during the fight. In a platonic, BFF sort of way. Also a little of that mindset of he is the boy, he should have done a better job protecting her since he thinks that’s what he is suppose to do…Yeah I over think things way too much…>///>) I’m just loving the little extra stuff here and there. It really has a lot of replay value already!
The latest update was so fun, by the by! Also just finally stop o really read @Aria is helping you with Coding and such. I’ve adored all of her works in progress! <3 Thought I recognized the name in the authors bit at the top of the game. Though I’m also adoring your writing style. and this story over all~ <3 Also I’m adoring Talar, he’s a sweet kid and nice to see he can make jokes about himself. x3
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After school if you laugh at Bastian the section about Beatrice gets repeated:
"Beatrice lips curved slightly as she passed by you. You hear her tell your other classmates to avoid you because you’re dirty. Laughing with her friends, but before she turned to leave she gave you a smile the she quickly walks away. Beatrice frowned as she passed by you. You hear her tell your other classmates to avoid you because you’re dirty. Laughing with her friends, she quickly walks away. "
Edit: another bug. When you’re in the village doing shopping and say hi to Beatrice:
Beatrice looked around before saying. “Hi Riesha, I’m sorry, but I need to go.” She greeted in a breathy voice then walked away from you. Beatrice merely raised his chin and snorted at your greeting, she briskly walked away from you. Logan tapped your shoulder. “A friend of yours?” He motioned to Beatrice as she walked away.
Edit: more bugs with Beatrice - Phase 4 back at school. both options show up.
Beatrice was having fun insulting you and Amber, but if the insults were said by someone else she chides them for their poor intellect. She would occasionally look at your direction if she said something nasty and would look hurt herself.
Beatrice was having fun insulting you and Amber, but if the insults were said by someone else she would praise them for thinking of cleaver things to make you and Amber look like dirt. She would occasionally look at your direction if she said something nasty and would look smug when she notices that you looked hurt.
Edit: Another bug, still at school, discussing shepians, both Beatrice options show up:
Beatrice shrugged as she took her seat. The boy in front of her turn to her and winked, she frowned at him and looked away. She sees you looking; she smiled at you then winked.
Beatrice shrugged as she took her seat. The boy in front of her turn to her and winked, she grinned at him and smiled smugly. She sees you looking; she frowned and rolled her eyes at you.
I love Logan, but him as an RO (while YES, HE’S ADORABLE) is…awkward. He’s your big brother, no matter the fact that you aren’t related- it’s like adopted siblings getting together. Bleck.
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Are you playing as a boy or a girl? I’m just wondering i you can romance Beatrice as a girl yourself
Girl. The later options seem to suggest you may be able to, but that just could be due to the bugs I mentioned.
Logan just constantly tugs at my heartstrings lol.
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Since there is a lot of people asking for logans RO, i think it whould be nice if we can choose the gender of logan if is going to be a RO, the problem is that you will have much more work xD
Side note: I like the save feature… theres a lot of released cog game without save game that is annoying as a client , to think that you will add it in this early wip is amazing 
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I have to disagree i like Logan just as he is (meaning a boy) Because I think that an already choose gender for a character from the author gives them more depth then, if said player decided that characters gender.
Sure some players love setting their own gender for said character but I am one of thoose that cant stand it because i also feel that if a character has one gender role they will be harder to persude and frankly only then does the character feels more real in my part. And not like a carbon copy of its other gender.
@XbamXitsXsidX a litel more heart moving from Logan and welcome to the Logan wagon with fellow Logan fans 
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it just change the gender not his personality or his “depth” as your saying, choose gender is an option in some games because it allow us to enjoy the history of some Ro that if their gender locked we will be missing part of history or content , whatever you want to call it, i will give you a satisfactory example Mass Effect (Ashley and Kaidan) and is not like it will hurt you, ¿you know? anyway i think that is for the writer to decide 
I wanted to write in these forums for a long time ago; this is actually my first comment in the forum.
I have to say that I really love your WIP; the first thing that attract me to a game apart from the plot (which I really love the slow pace of it, making the characters grow up slowly and maturing along with the MC), is the characters and their depth and characterization and you really have succeeded to this, kudos to you! 
The characters are well written, fleshed up, not some dolls-like characters serving a purpose; makes you getting attached to them and want to learn more of them; I have been attached to all characters and giving me different feelings, positive and negative; and this is something. Although, I have to say, that my favorite, at least until now is Logan; add me to his squad! 
Bastian too, I have the feeling he’ll turn out to an adorkable tsundere huhuhuhu…I really hope that you’ll consider making him a RO in the future (crossing fingers there), but even if this doesn’t happen, I still love your game and the plot with dragons; I’m really excited about getting my own egg and how this will be and also meeting all the different supernatural races.
@GloriaRose I also have to agree with you about the genders not being changed; it makes them more fleshed up and not serving the purpose of being simply a RO; I feel each its character is the gender they should be; I think they are perfect the way they are
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@GloriaRose Hahaha bet Agurt will have a heart attack or Hilda will since they both will comment on how worried they are about Logan being too attached to your MC. Lols. 
@Kronos conditional choice, I will double check the code if it is correct. 
@AngelOfTheBroken I changed them depending on your MC’s gender. I mean why won’t people react if your boy decides to wear a hairpin? Or a girl who decides to get a bug cage and catch bugs instead of playing dolls. One of the reasons why I hunted my partner was because I loved her “Death Reapers Contract” and Mate Bait that is slightly put on hold. Sad that she had to sell DRC it to another company and it’s a Japanese release. Good news it’s on a November release I think? 
@LordOfLA Thank you for the bug reports, will double check them. 
@Mim Yeah, I know, but deep-down people have this fantasy of forbidden things. Like combining fries and ice cream 
@anon4518890 I have to think about it, but it’s funny to think about a girl version of Logan 
I begged my grumpy partner for some sort of save system. I don’t know if it will be used when we finish this and pass it to COG as a hosted game. 
@kitkat First let me say, I like your user name! I’m getting hungry 
Ah I’m excited to write that part when you compete with the other students to get an egg.
Guys, I wish to add a skip scene to test, but this is not an Alpha or a Beta stage yet. It’s still a Works In Progress. Maybe when I finish we can do the skip scenes, but if this is nearing completion I’ll have to make a close Alpha and Beta. I need to find proof-readers as well as an editor/s.
Thank you so much for the likes! I have like 28 likes and I wanna cry I’m loving it! I’m almost done writing phase five and I’ll have to email it to be coded lols.
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@honeymichie Hahahaha thank you As a chocolate addict I am, I think this user name suits me well
I’m really excited about the upcoming content…can’t wait!
Btw, I wanted to say that I personally don’t like Logan RO because it is a “forbidden” (I myself don’t usually being attracted to these kind of love (?) themes), but mostly because I like the way you write their dynamics, which makes me think even more about their future interactions when the MC will be an adult; yes, it can be awkward, but this depends on the writer and how they will develop their relationship and their characters and how they gonna serve it to us, and you’re making an amazing job! 
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Haha they already said that when i replayed over and over again and i went to them in turn. Having heard that from one of her parents my mc was so happy deep inside. By the way @honeymichie how old is Logan for exampel was it 16 or 17?
@kitkat yay! Its the same with me i personally don’t like Logan RO because it is “forbidden”, but then again they arent even blood related, so i fail to see the wrong thing here since they only grew up togheter. But then again it can also be because where i come from it is completly fine to be with anyone as long as there is no blood bond in the way including your step brother/sister.
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@GloriaRose Yep, they’re not even blood related. 
But as I said, everything depends on the writer and how is writing the characters and the interactions and for me in this case, future Logan RO has potential. 
But wait, when MC’s parent said that about Logan being attached??? How did I miss that??
Edit: Actually scratch it, I found it!
Really love this, it’s got depth and detail but it doesn’t feel like I’m slogging through it. I can’t wait for more and as much as I love Logan, I really hope Yusef is romancable!
@kitkat Absolutly i also just love the scen with the parents and i am glad you found them.
@GloriaRose @kitkat…where’s that scene?!? I’ve just got to know!!!
Where’s that scene? I played this game 3 times in a row and still haven’t found it.
On phase four go talk to hilda or Agurt…
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