Yeah, I think I went a little overboard, lmao. It was even bigger before, had to stop myself from making a full hairstyle catalog if I hadn’t done that already.
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No major updates.
I changed the summary, made it shorter and in my opinion, more interesting. How it was before felt like I was reciting a history book haha.
Also changed the banner, the previous one felt too spacey.
Anyway, chapter two progress is going well, I’m aiming to release it by mid-October if all goes according to plan.
I might also split it into two parts and release the first by the end of this month, but we will see.
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Better than too little customization : )
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Good luck with the next chapter. Also take your time with it since do have your own stuff u want to do.
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Thank you !!
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Loved the atmosphere/setting of the story and the new customization options are pretty cool. I didn’t find any bugs but there’s some symbols in some parts so I thought of letting you know:
Can’t wait for the next chapters!
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Yeah, that’s because I accidentally deleted the file from my computer and had to copy-paste it from Dashingdon, so that’s where the symbols come from. Thank you so much for pointing them out, I honestly was losing my mind trying to find them all.
Now I will always keep like 10 backups, lesson learned.
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I uploaded a new startup file and forgot to add the save code, I fixed it so the save system should be working now.
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Pretty good, can’t wait to see future updates. Shame Robin’s not gender chooseable, really liked Robin.
Chapter Two, Part 1 is released if anyone’s interested in trying it out.
The next update will be bigger and won’t come till next month. But we see how it goes.
As always, any form of feedback is appreciated!
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I like Spider more than Robin surprising despite her character info u gave us. I thought she would be a boring stick in the mud but she’s alright despite how we met. I look forward to more
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She’s actually badass 
but not in the way ‘tough women’ are usually written in IFs (Look: Vicky, Ava). That’s refreshing.
@SleepDealer That part comes twice
Summary
Yeah, think I deserve the break to be honest," she’s gnawing at her lower lip, debating an idea in her head. “Say, want to swing by tonight? I’ve bought a new tattoo machine, and I figured I’d do some tests on you. If you’re up for it, I mean.”
“Hm, now that’s an offer that’s hard to refuse.”
“Well, you know where I live, so pass by if you get the chance.”
“I’ll think about it.” You nod, you might consider taking her up on her offer if you find some free time tonight.
“Okay, perfect,” she hooks her arm in yours and walks with you to the exit. “Just give me a heads up before you come.”
You push the metal door open, and Kelly’s arms leaves you to return to her side. “Or don’t, I always like a good surprise.” You smirk and nod at her before you exit the Bone-pit.
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I love it! I hope there will be more action scenes in the future. 
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Waiting patiently to meet Ves and fall head over heels…
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Love what you done so far!
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Thank you all for the kind feedback 
So, my plan is to release Chapter 2, Part 2, and Chapter 3 by the end of this month, and I’ll also be sharing portions of Chapter 4 since I already have it written.
I know it may seem like a lot to accomplish in such a short time, but I like to pressure myself since that’s the only way I can get things done, haha.
But yeah, I will see what I can do! If anyone has any feedback to offer on how I can improve what I’ve already shared, I’m open to it and appreciate any suggestions!
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You spoil us ;D
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I think I just like to torture myself, lol :DD
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Hey, don’t pressure yourself just take it easy for yourself, and I’m sure that we can wait for the rest of the chapters 
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