Subject Zero - WIP (Updated 9/25/23, 56K Words)

[Christopher_Bull]

Thanks dude but try not to pressure yourself too much and expand deadlines if u need to. U are your boss.

[rialta]

like your story ! very interesting !
I would like to know is if i romance nobody , is Ro can flirt/romance with me ? I’m curious

Thanks you

[DropsCity1992]

i like cyperpunk 2077 already a lot , so a no brainer to read this and happy i found it looks pretty promising cant wait for more

[icyLucy]

@SleepDealer

After all, the only thing they fear is you.

Music starts

[AChubbyBlackCat]

Just found this WIP. Really really good. I don’t often like sci-fi WIPs, but this hooked me right from the get-go with its premise. Love it.

[icyLucy]

Robin’s mannerism’s and looks reminds me Papa Heisenberg x James Barnes x Johnny

[icyLucy]

Just finished the demo. I like this story so far!

[Dragomer]

Very interesting stuff so far, just need to see how the mechanics and story develop before judging more.

[H_J]

Always appreciate it when someone dips their toe into sci-fi writing. Story is interesting so far, though, sometimes the dialogue comes across as a bit stilted. Looking forward to seeing more.

[Lonily]

Im already in love with this! I need more

[AwkwardNature]

I teally like this, I was engaged all the way through. Couldnt put it down. Pure

[Veraynea]

Hooked.

Absolutely hooked. Reading this at 10:30pm at night got me trapped in the Net of your making until 12:50am. Body says “no!”, but Mind says “more, more, more!”

Yes, I do need more. The humor and action is top-notch and I do so love joking and bantering with the folks until their brains are fried in a desperate search for comebacks.

I already have speculations on how that building fell. MC went nuts by coming into the city without neuron-drugs, affected bodyguard Psion, and had the man inadvertently level a building and kill the mayor’s son. Naturally, they cover up that story as “shoddy construction”, and now investigation is up on Subject Zero.

At least, that is my speculations based on how the story details go. I’d love to find out more on how the plot unfolds and eagerly await the next update!

Thanks for the fabulous 2 hours you’ve presented, and I am totally hooked, and thankfully it’s by a link on my phone, not a link attached to my neck. (Sheesh.)

Love what you have.

Very small and minor typos, punctuation, little-things below, hopefully they help.

Summary

My favorite one was “condom rapper” I’m almost having a mental battle on “maybe we should keep it.” But here it is, apprehended and handed over to the proper authorities.

Great work!

[Shenice_L]

For anyone who doesn’t have Tumblr, the Writer updated us there. The game is not abandoned. An update will come soon.

Just wanted to say that yes I’m alive, and no this project hasn’t been abandoned.

You should expect an update in the first quarter of 2024, that’s a promise. But if you don’t see an update in the first three months of this year, then maybe when the world ends you’ll get to call me a liar when we meet in hell. (Nah, for real tho, an update is coming.)

Ahh what else is there to say? Yes happy new year to everyone! Will this year be worse? Better? Who knows? But, one thing you can be sure of is that this story will be updated!

Oh and thank you for the 1Kplus followers, happy to know my 50k something game managed to garner this much attention so far so yeah, thank you!

That’s all for now!

Woohoo!! Be excited!!

[E_RedMark]

Holy Shit…

Ah man, I always get to the good one last.

Seriously, this should be a game. Such a talent. I wonder if those who made the Shadowrun Serie are hiring?