SoS: The Mortal Coil (WIP)

OMGosh!!! i loved the update and Michael :heart_eyes: Im totally Romancing you first!

It was good but i really dont like her, sorry not sorry :sweat_smile: She is toooo rude and i am so done with her. :mask:[quote=“Dae-kalina, post:346, topic:15298”]
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If possible i would love a hug scen with Michael :heart_eyes: Like M i get the forhead thing but i wanna hug you in return! Sure it might be akward and all but why not?- Or a hug scene in the future chapters :smirk:

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Wow, I was originally gonna have my male Gabriel find a nice mortal to romance but after seeing the update with Michael I’m having serious second thoughts. I really like the idea of my peaceful compassionate MC trying to mend their very strained relationship and get close again :blush:.

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omg yess @Elysium i was tottaly gonna go for Ryder or Ramiel first as a RO, but Michael made me go ohhhhh woow omg ohhh yesss, im gonna love you forever :laughing:

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The scene were Israfel (Spelling?) confronted Gabriel about the listining in on the conversation repeated. If it is any help I got into a fight with Michael. (It seen it jumped to the version where I had not gotten into an fight with Michael.)

The scene with Sabriel is okay. It is a little bit - choose your personality, but we have to get that at some point.
I do have a problem with straight up admitting to being deceptive. Even if Gabriel does have a certain kind of reputation. I think it would work better if it was not something we said out loud. Perhaps Sabriel can mention that our file says we have a reputation for being deceptive/honest to a fault instead. Admitting to it, while funny, is also just kind of stupid and really not subtle.

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drew some fanart :> (tumblr link)

my gabe & i think(?) Michael was said to have a braid? anyways this game & tumblr is amazing!

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So, first of all, I’d like to say this is an awesome game.

After my first read, this shot up to my favorite WIP currently around.

And when that list contains Fallen Hero and Minster High, that’s saying something.

But then again, I might like this more since I have this strange interest in stories about gods and godesses, angels and demons, the supernatural, celestial and cosmic forces that drive the Universe and whatnot.

Anyways, as much as I’d like to talk about the writing and stuff, it’s already pretty damn good… so I don’t think I’ll be able to help in this department.

So instead, I’ll do what any good student enjoys doing.

Asking questions. :smile:

Question no.1: do you plan on adding more angels, or are these all the angels we’ll be having for the whole story? This is a question that kept playing through my brain over and over again throughout my whole playthrough. Personally speaking, the two angels I’d like to see in this story are Metatron, king of angels, and Uriel… because I play a Korean game where she’s a girl and… yeah. I’ll stop there. But if they’re not there… that’s okay anyways, mah wingmates Michael, Lucy and Israfel… oh, and Ramiel if he/she/it ever shows up.

Question no.2: When we get our Mortal Shell, can we get a sort option where we let someone else pick it/ leave it to a coin flip? My Gabriel sincerely doesn’t care about his gender and I’d like to be able to play that straight.

Thank you for listening, and once more: awesome game man. Looking forward to what comes next.

EDIT: Now that I think of it… is angel to angel romance possible? And if it is, how do other angels view it? We’re all siblings after all… but do angels have the same views on incest as we do?

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Haha same~ I like fantasy, super natural and sci-fi stories. They always seem so awesome :smile:

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Angel to Angel romance will be possible, but you need not worry about incest since none of them are related if I’m remembering correctly. It’s like dating a childhood friend in the case of some or a coworker for others.

If my memory is correct, they were born from other angels as cherubs or something.

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Oh, I’m loving this demo. But I would love if it was still possible to use a spear as an Archangel. Spears are cool.

Or maybe I just missed that option? I’ve got a really bad attention-span.

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Some angels were created directly by God other angels like Gabriel had angel parents

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The demo is great but it would be great if I could use some kind of spear

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!!
Jesus liked your game @Dae-kalina. Now success is assured. :grinning:

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Will it just be us looking after the kid or will the angel put a female to go with you as well

I am a “female” angel … why is another needed?

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To keep the mc out of trouble if Micheal and that say he always get in trouble

The demand for spears is so real.

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Why is there a demand for spears when glaives are much cooler?

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Halberds for the win.

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Add more weapons for more variety :smile:

Assault rifles for the win

well that last one is a light machine gun

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