Shattered : Oblivion (WIP, 96k words) - STANDALONE REWORK TEASER AVAILABLE ON POST 494 (31/10/2024)

I see, If I drop Nasuverse lore you work faster, why didn’t you say so.

Maybe I should explain the moon.

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Stahp, remember what happened to the door and warhammer thing. >:(

More seriously, I’ve just realized that I had polished it as much as I believe I could without outside opinion. Initially I wanted to release it along with chapter 4, but there’s still a decent chunk of work left on that, so I’ll keep working on it a little longer.

I’ve also worked on the side on the base for the new stat system, so that’s probably my next project for Shattered after chapter 4.

In the meantime I just want to slowly go back to the Wight King, while finishing chapter 4 of Shattered. I’ve neglected TWK too long.

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Ah the great door purge of… '18. Probably even later. And then the quivering abs awakened.

Probably will have a chance to look at it later tonight.

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The dark ages of '18. To this day, I tremble thinking of the horrors inflicted on the people of this fair forum.

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fun times

“Silence, you measly ape. You dare speak back to me? You, a disgusting worm wiggling at my feet, you, who are worth less than the mud under my boots, less even than the shit feeding the crops? You insolent, impudent child, since your life is worth so little that you would throw it away, you may feed this earth as well!”

JINKIES!! …Well damn. :astonished:

“Who gave you the permission to touch me, creature? Learn your place.”

Hehee, I like this MC.


This whole scene has me breathing so heavily and Smiling oh so cruelly; that I might just need to seek psychological assistance.

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:rofl: :joy: :fire: My favourite type of MC.

I’m glad that in times when losers MCs who are bullied by RO are popular, this game exists.

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I agree. Truly a blessing

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Sir I play RimWorld I assure you whatever you’ve come up with I have tried.

Is there a major difference between dark elves and high elves?

I suppose both are knife ears at the end of the day.

Titania

Funnily enough my name is an offshoot of her hubby, which I was disappointed wasn’t an option.

Also does that mean Shakespeare is canon?

“he’s a grown elf, we can’t keep him here forever, we’re not talking about an abandoned dog we took in, it shouldn’t be long before the amnesia passes and then do you think he’ll want to stick around?”. Orion? Then, he wants me gone, she doesn’t.

Cap he’s

Poor John Shattered: Oblivion

He can’t comprehend being a couple of bros. I’m sure he’ll get the homie code someday.

I wasn’t even part of the 40k part since I knew nothing about it. Now I do.

You ever have an existential crisis over how long you’ve been working on this?

You can’t just tell me not to make Fate references and then give me a heart rending spear.

Hm, delicious despair. Little trauma builds character.

mh the tears of unfathomable sadness delicious.

The game say end of demo after ch 1

Can’t believe our joker arc was started by a wolf

Just a couple of bros. Typical homie behavior.

Yay an error. Arms

Isn’t it a bit weird to name the thing you worship demiurge? I suppose this isn’t the gnostic version. And more platonic version.

Speaking of platonic, Loran’s arm seems fun. Maybe I should heal myself…

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You too can forego such useless and weak things as “therapy”. Unleash your arcane wrath on the fools who trigger you instead!

The first ever interactive fiction where YOU get to be the tsundere.

More seriously, I’m not sure if you’re referencing something in particular, beside the most infamous ones like Black Magic from Heroes Rise. I did see a lot of posts on subreddit from people looking for ROs that will step on them. In which case, like always, the bottoms are to blame! >:D

But yeah I’m not a fan of characters that let themselves be pushed around, both in term of MC and RO.

It’s hard to even compete with Rimworld, but that’s the difference between being the kind of omniscient, omnipotent and omnimalevolent manager(tormentor) you get to be playing rimworld and being a character within the story.

Affinities and corruption are the most important ones.

High elves are highly attuned to magic. Almost every single high elf is a sorcerer, though not all of them are uh… “military-grade”, but not being able to use magic is the abnormal for them. Millennias of a sheltered and decadent lifestyle have rendered their constitution weak however. They are generally tall but relatively frail-looking.

Dark elves are the product of an old demonic invasion, a large part of the army sent to stop them by the high elves had been corrupted through prolonged exposition to an extremely powerful archdemon and the rift to hell. The first dark elves were very different from their modern descendants, those who returned from the battle were sometimes warped beyond recognition. The high elves, in a classic high elf move, believed that their presence would pollute their people with the same corruption that affected them, and exiled the cursed ones. Their demonic ancestry had granted the dark elves with a great affinity for dark magic and removed the weakness of high elf bodies. Demonic mutations are very common among them, usually from birth, ranging from discreet to very obvious. They tend to be slightly taller than high elves and beefier.

I felt like more people knew Oberon than Titania, and didn’t want to add too many names from our world’s mythology.

Local sorcerer aghast that there was something to relationships other than power plays and sex and no one told them.

I love warhammer but I can’t help but think some people love it a little too much lol.

Over the time I’ve been working on this, not really? Sometimes a bit of frustration, because of how many adjustments I feel I need to make, because what gets to me more is the times of stagnation. As long as I feel like I’m progressing, I feel fine. I haven’t been “stuck” like, truly mired in the blank page zone, except once, back when I was depressed. It’s the one time I had a truly awful time, and I think that really crippled me for a while. That was the existential crisis’ golden age.

It’s a bit ridiculous, but what causes me the most existential dread is the silence, I think. I am the second-guessing and wild speculation master, and when I start thinking it often goes directly to assuming the worst.

Character: Is having the worst time of her damn life, living through experiences that would leave many permanently emotionally crippled. Faced with harsh reality in one of the most brutal ways imaginable, and fearing what it is slowly turning them into.

You Chucklefucks:

I totally understand. XD

It’s a bit of a nod to both. Though I mostly wanted to use the word, not necessarily the concepts that are attached to it in our world.

The word is inherited from the southern roots of Aquilea, and it is meant to embody a being that is both close to its followers, in the sense that it is the source of all they do, and all around them, and utterly unknowable in its magnitude, power and will, the every essence of creation itself. Which is what they believe IT is. Or used to.

It’s funny that the platonic to gnostic perception of Demiurge embodies the fall of Aquilea itself a little.

I can’t believe this is still a thing, I feel like I’ve fixed it five times. >:(

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It’s not like I’m doing this for you dumbass. It’s just seeing you so weak and pathetic infuriates. Besides who’ll travel with me you get killed? Heh, ever thought of that? Though given all that happened… you’re kind of my responsibility. This is strictly repaying a favor, idiot. Get that through your big dumb skull and don’t get any weird ideas.
… I only used you as a neckrest because you hogged the bed!!!

Dark Elves are just built better got it.

Only the densest protagonist allowed.

I mean you did give us an option to whisper into her ear and push her towards murder.

Also given Valtria’s tits. What’s the pantheon looking like?

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S-stupid human! I am not “down bad”!

They’ve discovered the dark arcane of GAINS

What years of neglect during your formative years, feeling betrayed by every single person you’ve ever known and even more years of self-loathing does to a comrade.

Reminded of Andrew Ryan shenanigans.

I don’t necessarily endorse every choice I allow you to make, given the freedom to choose, you’ve chosen this path, the burden of choice and the consequences of your actions belong only to you. I’ve dealt you the cards, but you’ve chosen the one to play.

That probably sounds more pretentious than I intended, but I think the share of responsibility on that particular choice is heavily tipped the player’s way.

It’s a big question. There are no strictly cut pantheon in this world, mostly people associating somewhat related gods together, or drawing from ancient history and making such conclusions that they belong together.

The kind of gods worshiped, and how many, depends a lot on where you are. There, far in the eastern forests of the Aquilean empire, pagan worship is still going relatively strong. Generally people will be into several gods, or none at all, except for clerics of a particular deity.

Valkya is a bit special, she’s part of a particular group of gods that incarnate identity, sexuality and love. Each being a sort of “patron” god to the people they represent. She’s the goddess that represents those who identify as women. She and her kindred are some of the oldest human gods, and are as mysterious as they are ubiquitous. They are worshiped almost everywhere there are humans, and any believer will tend to include them among the gods they pray to.

I’m still doing work on this part of the lore, there are a lot of gods in this world, not a lot of them are really fleshed out enough to talk about yet. But if you have questions on the mechanics of deities, that’s easier for me to answer.

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Didn’t expect minor demons to be that strong.

I know it was an ambush and they acted together but still.

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You lesser species always take things out of context and in the worst way. Minds always in the gutter . Oh gods, you really do need me, no one else would tolerate you.

I mean I did do it with best intentions. It’s why I told her to stop stabbing the body afterwards.

Think there’s someone who made a demon deal for massive gains?

I mean since she’s basically saying holy tits

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Demons are really dangerous. They know what they’re doing. That was the 100% power of these particular demons, the imp’s charge wouldn’t have been possible if the others didn’t hold the templars still while he was powering up.

Even weak demons are usually still significantly stronger than mortals. So when they work together like this, it’s really hard to deal with. Don’t mess with Hell!

(The elf could not remember about the ivory cities orgies! Dramatic irony!)

Zodd the Immortal: “Follow my 10 steps program to be as ripped as me! All you need is this egg!” Holds up Behelit.

Also I’m stupid and I said she’s the goddess of CIS women, when she’s specifically not, she’s the goddess of anyone who identifies as a woman.

How does anyone get their own lore wrong lol.

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The ivory city orgies were a cultural event, does partaking in wine at a party make you a drunkard?

I feel like it’s less than 10. Although we are making the mother of all omelettes. Can’t frett over every step.

In terms of transformations I’d prefer Griffith. Though does that mean I get a half blind one armed swordsman screaming my name a lot? Because that could interrupt my beauty sleep.

Also I’m guessing demon sacrifices are a thing. What counts as mine? Like if I beat someone up could I sacrifice them? Or if I was the leader of a group would they count? Can people mind control others into agreeing?

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No but having a glass of every bottle on display might.

I’m on the side of the guy that screams a lot. All praise Rickert glorious slapper of the bird bitch.

Soul sacrifice is ritualistic so you would either need someone who consents, or someone you’ve coerced into giving to the community one way or another. You can’t just grab someone off the street and eat their soul, unless that’s specifically your ability I guess.

The ritual keeps the soul from drifting when you extract it, and from then on you can do whatever you intended with it, whether it was to absorb it yourself or to bargain with it with an entity interested.

The worth of the soul matters more than the quantity. And that worth can vary a lot depending on your sacrifice, and who you’re talking to. In general, the more powerful the person, the stronger the soul, the soul of a random peasant comes nowhere close to the soul of a demon or a powerful warrior.

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Alchemy the science of understanding, deconstructing and reconstructing matter. However it is not an all powerful art. It is impossible to create something out of nothing. If someone wishes to obtain something, something of equal value must be given. This is the law of equivalent exchange, the basis of all alchemy. However in accordance with this there is a taboo among alchemist. Human transmutation is strictly forbidden. For what could equal the value of a human soul?

But muh dream?

I still have to read like a hundred chapters. Not too sure how I feel about the whole Femto thing since so far only the one duke didn’t lose all human value after turning into a demon. Then again Griffith was jerk beforehand… on the other hand from spoilers I’ve seen Griffith cries whenever he’s human for a bit.

Then again if God says you’re good to do whatever…

Guts should use the beylit. What goes around comes around and all that.

Chainsaw Man p1 spoilers

So anyone with an ability like that? As a purely intellectual insight of course.

Tis but partaking in the local cuisine. You must diversify your pallet.

You know given the whole friendzone I’m picturing bloodline memes with Loran.

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So Tzimisce-core, I love it

(Sorry for the super late reply, had missed a lot of the thread due to forgetting)

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The Alchemists have never heard of this “Ethics” thing, but they hate it.

Being a God Hand slave doesn’t sound like a good deal.

A banshee with a large straw.

I mean, I’m not judging. High elves are just particularly hedonistic, and some are very hypocritical about it.

Breathing Dining Chair enthusiast.

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