I’ve only just created the ‘Pre’ part of the story, and it doesn’t really have much choices regarding the MC yet, since its like an initiating sequence kind of thing. Sorry.
Sane is a story about the struggle of the remaining sane people to survive in an overturned world. Due to a chemical war that had occured, most of the food and water sources have depleted, and the humans have to scrounge up everything and everyone in order to survive. Some people took it to extreme measures and started to feed on their own kind, and made themselves known by their group name of ‘Breeds of Life’.
Thats basically the gist of the story. Not much to tell yet, but I hope it can give you some understanding of what the story will be about.
Forgive my writing mistakes, and please lend me some honest feedbacks for my work! Thanks a lot.
Edits:
5/11/2019
-Fixed the error pop up when choosing to ‘Help them’ while having the old-
fashioned-way combat style.
-Fixed a small typo
I really like it so far. It’s interesting. I thought this wip was called, “Sand” instead of “Sane”. I think there should be warnings for the beginning because there are graphic context.
I like your idea and your story is off to a great start! Also found a typo if that’s alright? “Presences have been compromised” instead of “presences has been compromised”. Keep up the good work!
Also really love your writing, by the way.
