I didn’t understand this much at all. There is a lack of individual character development, really, I just know the group’s views. Try to improve on it by adding more individual/pairing moments and soliloquies, so each character can develop. There is a lot of explanations, little showing, for me, and the fight is pointless. Finally, I don’t see the point of the good/evil.
On the plus side, the storyline is good, setting is very well developed, and the character at the beginning had a great development.