Hello, you lovely people! Hope y’all are safe.
Anyway, let’s get into it, shall we? As you can see, I’ve begun to work on something new, mainly, a new project! It will be big and it will most definitely haunt me at night and make me cry during the day. But I love it. I’ve had this idea for over a year now I believe. I even mentioned it at some point but the idea has changed a lot during that time.
Also, because I’ll be using this project in order to get through school next year, I’ll be very excited to get all sorts of feedback. What I mean is that this story will be a big part of my final grade.
You wake up in prison. How you got there or even why you’re there, you don’t know. All you do know is, you hate it. And it definitely doesn’t help that you lack one of your senses. But to compensate for that, you have a power, an ability that no one else has: you can see and sense souls.
Everything seems miserable and hopeless, until one day, a group of people decides to turn the tides and break you out. Everything else is up to you and the future.
In this story you will be:
- Able to choose between five challenges concerning basic senses (mute, blind, deaf etc…)
- Choose between six different races.
- Choose your gender (trans options will possibly be added at a later date)
- Choose your own name because you’ll need one.
- Romance romANCE ROMANCE.
The story currently contains the prologue, chapter 1 and a small part of chapter 2.
Currently, the word count excluding code is: ~20 000 words
The word count including code is: ~140 000 words
Do I have a schedule when this will be updated? No, I don’t. I will try to update this once half, if not the whole chapter, is ready. I will make small bug fixes and grammar fixes that will not be noted as an update in the heading.
PS: I will provide drawings (my own) to give a better understanding of how these people look. Because I’m not an artist, do not expect some crazy shit that makes you go WOW.
- Age: 320 years
- Race: Dragnyoming
The leader and oldest of the group of five. Having lived through many hardships over the years, they would be the best person to turn to in order to get some help.
- Age: 25 years
- Race: Lupine
The second in command and doctor of the group. Comes off as grumpy with that ‘‘You can go die in a ditch if I don’t like you’’ aura. It would probably be better to keep to their good side.
- Age: 28 years (divine age unknown)
- Race: Angel
The spymaster of the group with a flirtatious quirk. No one is safe from this peacock so you better keep your secrets close to your heart than ever before they get scooped away along with the organ itself.
- Age: 21 years
- Race: Demon
A little depressed kid who’d rather go die in a corner with a Gameboy rather than look you in the eyes. Just…give this one the love and affection that I’m trying so hard to kill.
PS: Drawings will come at a later date.
- Age: 23 years
- Race: Enhanced Humanoid
The ever-sarcastic pilot and engineer of the group. There’s always a joke or a snarky remark up this gambler’s sleeve. If you can’t fight them with fire, kill them with anecdotes and hope they shizzle and die.
PS: Drawings will be added at a date later date.
I’m looking for all sorts of feedback. I’m most interested in your thoughts because those will play a part in my school project (all feedback will be anonymous to the judges).
If you find any grammar issues or if some sentences seem odd, let me know.
English isn’t my first language, but I am confident in my ability to communicate in it. But I am prone to mistakes, like everyone else.
Link: https://dashingdon.com/go/6067 (being reworked)
This story will contain: some strong language, some violence, character death, possibly more but I’ll update this list as we go.
- Demo uploaded.
- Chapter 1 fully uploaded.
- Stats screen updated.
- X portraits added.
- Part of Chapter 2 added.
- Stats screen updated.