Thanks for all your feedback everyone! I’m still debating with myself over Sunshine, as she’s one of the more… harsher characters, shall we say. Her replacement as RO is a lot nicer, but I think a bit too similar to Marina, and I really want to have some variety. Maybe I can pull a character from somewhere else and insert them into here, that’s what I’ve done with several characters already. I’ll make my mind up after chapter one is finished, because the rest of it involves you spending quite a bit of time with two detectives of your choosing.
Also, something I forgot to mention earlier, the story that this is based off is a lot darker than I intend for this to be, the humour in it is very dark, and there’s mood whiplash all over the place. I’m trying to tone it down for the game, but if anything seems out of place in that regrard, it’s because I’ve accidentally let something slip through.
And here’s a little bit of information regarding the other four ROs:
Ariel Washington, a member of the highly esteemed and influential Washington family, a family of vampires, though he’s still human, despite the fact that it’s tradition for them to be turned as soon as they become eighteen. He’s the detectives’ main source of vampire information, and also good friends with most of them. He’s also Angel’s doppleganger.
Antonia Stevenson, a werewolf, who with her brother Emmett, runs the local charity for helping werewolves, which seems to get vandalised a lot, and as a supernatural related crime, it always falls on the detectives to investigate. She’s more open to humans than some of her kind, though that’s as long as they’re not treating her like a monster.
Leon Leapai. He died a few decades ago, and was then resurrected by a necromancer by accident, and became a ghoul. Then he died again, but he soon get better. And again. And again. And, well, you get the picture. He works for Secret Service for Supernatural Control, and his main hobby is flirting with his boss until he eventually cracks.
Wes Schwartz, a witch, and another agent for the SSSC, working on the same team as Leon. She’s the main diffuser of arguments on the team, often using her powers, so it’s a good thing all her teammates are immortal. She’s also the most “normal”, so usually the one people will go to when they need help.