Hnnnnmmm I think Mon is an experimented human done by Silas? Aint it? He experiments on humans here so they can adapt to fight off the monsters? And Silas is recruitin me lol
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Ohh–it is indeed very intriguing! This is definitely something I’d look forward to! I’m already keen to know what will happen in Chapter 2-lol anddd also I had to admit Silas has my interest more–I wonder if there’s more to him than what meets the eye-- I want to know what he’s hiding or what’s up with him really? And I’m loving the interactions of the MC with Mia and Virgil although I hope I could also interact with Riley more–all I got from her was the subtle nod and the call afterwards. But regardless I’m loving this so far soooo keep it up! I’ll be rooting for you!
I also have my own theories on who the villain could be–tho I still have to admit that I’m kinda lost in thoughts. This game certainly had me thinking a lot now and that’s great! It means the mystery-thriller effect is working!
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@matcharoon I’m really glad you’re enjoying it so far! Thank you so much for pointing all that out, it helps a lot and I’ll get to fixing it shortly!
@SpanishBrEaD My lips are sealed… 
@KyeotMingXi Really glad you’re enjoying it! And yeah, there was only so much interaction I could give the MC with Riley in the first chapter, but don’t worry, she’ll become a much more prominent character in the coming chapters! (Already in chapter two there’s a lot more interaction you can have with her).
And I’m glad it’s got you thinking! That’s definitely what I was going for. With the first few chapters, I want them to be like a classic slow-burn horror where you’re just trying to understand what’s going on and then once you do figure it out, the action picks up later.
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I love mysterious/thriller scifis so this one was really a fun read!
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It’s good so far but I think the Mc is way too observant right now since not much sussy things have happened apart from that science guy who won’t leave us alone and the bedroom scene.
Anyway why did the Mc want to come on board apart from obvious reasons? It seems the Mc is full of mystery just like the ship
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I have a hunch it’s the creepy science guy who is obsessed with us for some reason. We even get warned of danger on the ship about us being involved in a Sinister plot of some guy
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Yep my hunch also, he’s like the villainous type–he gives that kind of vibe for me, not to mention how he’s seem to act so suspicious around the MC.
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I’ve said it before, and I’ll say it again: Stab. In the face 
Stabbity stab stab. Then maybe shove him out the airlock for good measure.
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Interesting demo! I’m wondering what’s the actual reason Silas is trying to get close to MC. I don’t want to judge him yet, it’s too early to say I don’t like him lmao
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Interesting read! Im on high alert with silas! He doesn’t exactly annoy me, I’m just high key suspicious of him. You can’t experiment on me doctor, no sir. 
Virgil seems like a likeable person. I think he’d be my space station bff
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Well at long last here we are…
Chapter two is here!
There is a new link as I had to delete the old DashingDon file - https://dashingdon.com/play/shpooky/prosperity-station/mygame/ and I can’t currently update the original post!
Chapter two is a 117K words update bringing the WIP up to 164K words in total with an average of 29K words per playthrough!
I have no excuse as to why this took me so long. My life has been hectic the last year and I’ve been left with little time or motivation to write. But like I said, I’m not giving up on this project!
Chapter three is in progress slowly. I’m not going to give an estimate date as that went so well last time but hopefully it shouldn’t take a year this time! Hopefully…
The main reason the update has taken so long is I’ve gotten a new job a little further out from my home and the commute takes up many hours of my day, so on work days I have little to no time to write and on days off, I’m simply recovering and have no motivation to write. I am planning to move closer to work by the end of the year and get myself a proper writing set-up, so hopefully, come the new year, I should have a lot more time on my hands to focus on writing!
With this new chapter there’s a few extra things I’m looking for from tester aside from the usual spelling mistakes and such. While writing, I lost track of how many character ‘relationship points’ I was rewarding the reader. So as such, I’m not sure if I’ve set the boundaries for certain relationship checks too high or too low. (For explain, please let me know if you’ve been horrible to someone like Silas but he inexplicable is nice to you and the same goes for other characters). I am going to rework how I’ve given out the points eventually, but for the time being, feedback on that would be super helpful! As an added bonus, if you could attach a screenshot of your stats page once you reach the end of chapter two, that would be amazing!
Other then that, continuity is going to be a big thing I’ll need feedback on. It’s been over a year since I really touched chapter one, so I might have found myself repeating bits the PC or other characters already know. So if you find anything that feels odd continuity wise, please let me know!
Other then that, just general feedback will be great! I’m sure spelling mistakes and grammatical errors will have slipped through plenty of times. Also just let me know what you like! What works and what doesn’t!
Thank you for your patience and I hope you enjoy chapter two! I will be posting updates about chapter three as progress is made.
Once again, the new link - https://dashingdon.com/play/shpooky/prosperity-station/mygame/
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Yaaaaaaay, this is backkkkk!!!1 :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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Doctor Who reference 
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Yeah, just as I’d completely forgotten how much I despise Virgil.
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So I kept the note and…
No Virgil and me, that’s not what happened. You were literally both right there as one of you put the note in your pocket.
It’s not even on a different page. It’s separated by like 3 paragraphs.
Also there were multiple times when “minute” was spelled “minuet” and at first I thought I was a singular typo but it occurred again.
So I’m just gonna assume this is referring to a dance and not a unit of time
Just finished reading through the two chapters, and I have to say, I enjoued it!
I did encounter a bug, which @maveric619 already mentioned: after showing Riley the first note, when I decide to keep it anyway and she leaves, the text has Virgil and Mia acting like I actually gave it to her, and then right after there’s another paragraph of them where they react to me not giving it to her.
Another thing: Whenever we had the option to show one of the notes to Riley, I was always reluctant to do it. But not because I thought she wouldn’t believe us - it’s because I suspected she might’ve been in on it as one of the station workers, and didn’t want to let her know we knew/had gotten info from someone.
Would it be possible to maybe add that as a dialogue option?
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