Thank you for sharing your art with us Wizim! A great insatiable hunger for any and all wuxia/xianxia has been lit inside me and I would be consumed in suffering if not for what seems to be a sudden bloom of stories in this setting 
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I love it so much, the amazing writing, the characters, the lore.
Con: I hate the cliffhanger lol 
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As a person who doesnāt drink alcohol. I got poisoned. And I think my character hasnāt got pissed off because I actually like. The girl were guarding.!
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I got poisoned even though I didnāt drink the wine. Is that supposed to happen?., but All in all the wip looks very promising.
Suggestion: Can you add a cheat mode in the future updates? It would make it more fun
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I loved the update! I took the opportunity to reread everything, and itās still as good as I remember. I really like how you introduce the lore in the story and the training/fighting scenes are very dynamic and well done (I also love the little rivalry between MC and Wei Qing). Now, Iām curious to see where the story will go after that ending.
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I swear there wasnāt supposed to be one, but I didnāt like where the chapter ended, so I decided to move the next bit into chapter 3
Yes, itās not an error. Itās simply that the wine wasnāt the problem
Okay, a stupid question 
What should I imagine when you say cheat mode?
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Iām happy to hear that you enjoyed it! 
Also, thank you for saying that the fight scenes are okay. You have no idea how much I struggle with writing those. They are my number one enemy (with dance scenes being a very close second ).
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That is good, but Iām pissed. Mister top on the food change Might have just declared war on me.Because in my characters mind If you poison. Counts as almost hurting innocent. I think I donāt view the person who did this as an innocent anymore. Heās free game. And meat is on the menu.!!
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It was the scent in the air, not the wine we didnāt drink xD
Excuses, excuses lol xD fine, Iāll wait until we get a chapter 3ā¦is it coming? hopefully xD
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Well, I wouldnāt really call Master Hua innocentā¦
Indeed! It was the incense 
Donāt worry, Iām not giving up on this story. Chapter 3 will come, but the question is when 
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Like an option to maximize all the Stats and play the game without worrying about the stats
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Aah, I see. Iāll think about it! 
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Loved the update, what a cilffhanger!
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Really good. Wuxia games are super rare. Hopefully we can get a OP MC from a wuxia story soon.
What a cliffhanger. I love the characters and interactions. Keep it up. Canāt wait for more updates and information.
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One of the points that caught my attention the most was this! The rarity. Iām excited about how magnificent this WIP can turn out. Very good!
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This is exactly what I was looking for, the human mask was especially awesome and made me feel like I was really in a wuxia. All the details are super immersive. Iām excited to see where it goes.
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Your MC will certainly get the oportunity to grow more powerful!
You have eased my worries a bit, I was (and still am) super nervous about writing a wuxia, haha.
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hows chapter 3 coming along
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Itās being worked on!
Iāve been writing my other project, but now that the updateās out, Iāll be shifting my focus to Yinshan once again. Iāve written some bits of chapter 3, but not that much. Iād say you can expect the update in January, at the earliest, but February is more likely.
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