Neutralizing You (WIP)


#1

Hello everyone,
I’m the leader of a game development team. Currently we’re working on a project (WIP) called Neutralizing You. It’s an RPG game with Visual Novel feature.
Here’s more about it.

Title: Neutralizing You

Price: TBA

Story: Time-travelling is a common thing when you watch movies or read novels. But if YOU are the one who was traveled back into the past, will it be a good thing for you?
The protagonist was suddenly traveled back into the past without any preparation. She knew nothing but herself. Contrary to that, everyone seems to know her?
In the game, you’ll be given a mission to retrieve ingredients to make a powerful potion for unnatural mental illness. It sounds like a simple thing to do as you’ve played many games about retrieving ingredients before. But will it really be a simple task?
Many creature from the non-exist world, at least that’s what you think, came to mess up with your journey. And the reason behind that, lays beyond your supposition…
(Ask me more about the story if you’re curious)

Features:

  1. For battle, you may choose between Visual Novel mode or RPG mode
  2. Gallery
  3. Music Room
  4. 2 halfway-stroylines (there will be 2 choices that’ll highly impact half of the game storyline)
  5. SFX and BGM

Characters:

  1. Protagonist:
    => A commoner in her ‘real life’ and a princess of Chrolstice Kingdom in the past. She is known for her good martial arts. She’s also good in playing the zither. She’s well-educated and well-behaved. Her aura is somewhat elegant. But she’s very sensitive and moody. A very beautiful princess that would attract any prince to ask for her hand in marriage. Sometimes she is timid. Later it will be revealed her true identity that caused weird creatures tried to mess up her journey.

(Beautiful, Good Martial Arts, Good sense of art (music), Well-educated and well-behaved, Elegant, Sensitive, Moody, Timid)

Description:

  • Age: 22
  • Height: 168 cm
  • Weight: 45 kg
  • Skin color: Light
  • Hair color: Black
  • Aura: Elegant
  1. Ethan/Zhou Huo Lu:
    =>The protagonist’s royal brother, in her ‘real life’ and in her past life. He’s over-protective and really love his sister. But he doesn’t really care about others’ personal matters or feelings (except for his sister). But he has a warm heart and very considerate. He’s muscular (strong) and very good in using his mystical sword, which he brings to almost everywhere.

(Has a warm heart, Considerate, Muscular and strong, Very good in martial arts (using his sword), Handsome, Over-protective, He won’t hold back to hurt others’ who annoyed his sister, Doesn’t really care about how others’ will feel if they annoyed his sister)

Description:

  • Age: 24
  • Height: 182 cm
  • Weight: 68 kg
  • Skin color: A bit tanned-light color
  • Hair Color: Dark brown (almost black)
  • Aura: Ruling/Demanding
  1. Keith:
    => The real crown prince of the Kingdom of Cranshade. He’s the prince of dragons (Sky dragon) but was banished from the dragon palace since her half-brother framed him, saying the Keith violated the rules in the palace. He’s described as ‘gay’ at first. His grandpa thought that he became a gay due to an ‘accident’. And so he act as a gay since he was really disappointed that even his grandpa who dot him so much would misunderstood him too.

(Has a warm heart, Good in martial arts, Handsome, A good Ruler, Insensitive, Not very considerate, Too upfront, Sometimes he can be rude because of his upfront personality)

Description:

  • Age: 24
  • Height: 182 cm
  • Weight: 67 kg
  • Hair Color: Silver
  • Skin Color: Light color
  • Aura: Ruling/Demanding
  1. Wendy/Wei Xin:
    => The protagonist’ personal maid. She was automatically being appointed as the princess’ maid from the time the princess arrived in her village. She’s very loyal to her master. Eventhough she’s a woman, but she knows some moves of martial arts.

(Loyal, Pretty good in martial arts, Over-strict)

Description:

  • Age: 30
  • Height: 162 cm
  • Weight: 47 kg
  • Hair Color: Black
  • Skin Color: A bit tanned-light color
  • Aura: Calm and Collected
  1. Old Man (Keith’s grandpa)
    => He’s the King of Cranshade Kingdom who was forced to step down by his own son and grandson. He was banished along with Keith, the first prince, because of treachery and conspiring with Keith. He really love his first grandson and he was really shocked to know that Keith is gay.

(Has a warm heart, Considerate, A kind ruler, Not strict (the reason why there are treacheries), Don’t have enough faith in his grandson, Often decide something based on influences and the most-voted decision and not the truth)

Description:

  • Age: 87
  • Height: 174 cm
  • Weight: 70 kg
  • Hair Color: White
  • Skin Color: A bit tanned-light color
  • Aura: Warm
  1. Sky Dragon:
    => The Great General of the Cranshade Kingdom who was the best friend of Keith when he hadn’t been banished. He misunderstood Keith too when he was banished and hate him for that. But actually he still care for Keith as if he’s his own little brother.

Description:

  • Age: 102
  • Length: 100 metres
  • Skin Color: Gold
  • Aura: Heavy
  1. Titan Crab:
    => The spy of the rival kingdom of Cyanride, which destroyed Cyanride Kingdom and cause the protagonist and her brother to leave their home and were adopted by the ruler of Chrolstice Kingdom who was childless. (The King of Chrolstice Kingdom is the protagonist’s uncle).

Description:

  • Height: 5 metres
  • Shell Color: Orange and Blue
  • Aura: Dark
  1. Su Lian:
    => A villager who was in love with Keith. She often came to Keith’s house to take care of Keith’s grandpa.

Description:

  • Age: 20
  • Height: 164 cm
  • Weight: 45 kg
  • Hair Color: Brown
  • Skin Color: Light color
  • Aura: Soft


QUESTION(s)

  1. Will you be interested to play this game?
  2. Is the story interesting?
  3. What would you like to be added in the game?
  4. Your suggestion for the game price?
  5. Comments or Questions?

If you’d like to know more (about the pictures, etc), you can visit our site at http://www.ninjavault.cu.cc


#2

Well, visual novels are not my thing, but I wish you good luck with what seems to be your first game. When I click the thread, I expected to see a Choicescript game since this is the forum for Choicescript and games made in it.

An idea as there might be VN fans here: Ask a mod to move this thread from Works in Progress to Other Interactive Fiction. I think they can do that.

Why? Because when people see WIP, they expect a Choicescript game in progress. I think this thread would do just fine in Other Interactive Fiction category.