Aaa, thank you!! I’m so, so , so excited to get this update out and behind me, and finally get to see what yall think about it. 
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Woohoo!
Sneak peek of tha praises
It’s so beautiful! I divorce Reality and jump into the story forever! Adieux!
Have my 1st born! have at it!
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Thou shall be blessed forever and ever! So shall it be! Now, give me a Sneak peek? Pretty please? *
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Oy, I give you one calf and two chickens for that Sneak peek! Take it or leave it!*
Looking forward to the update! 
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Oh my goodness these are gems 
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;)
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HECK YEAH I’ll be looking forward to it! I wish you luck on a speedy path to completing the update <3
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That sneak sneak peak tho 
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sweats
You can’t do this to me… omg how am I going to get through the month thinking about THIS
Have I mentioned lately how much I adore you?
And…L/Id poly when 
J/K 
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@Mistyleaf123 Thank you very much! I too hope that this is the last sprint before I can call it done. I swear I’ll come out of nano looking like this
@K-Pop_Trash wink wink :>
@Radiantbliss You’re such a treat It has been a boost to me, thinking about how you, and others ofc, will react to some things I have included in this update… 
The flashback chapter is definitely a fave.
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Oh my god, i havent checked this wip for so long cuz i thought it was on a hiatus, but now the first thing i see is a new update coming? This is a good day
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remember to take a break now and then! 
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Thank you! I sure will, I’m only typing like a madman this weekend because work took too much of my energy last week. When this update is out, I will breath easy again. :>
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Can’t wait to meet my beloved Yor again 
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Y will jump on any opportunity to spend time with the hunter, so I’d say the feelings mutual
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Aww. He’s too adorable 
… I shouldn’t be so excited 
I chose the lover route and Leith was going to be my main RO. Ah, still this unresolved dilemma which of these ROs I prefer…
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Can’t wait for the update! I’m looking forward to more interaction with Idren; I absolutely love the rivalry between Id and Mc xD He’s my favourite RO so far, but Yor is close behind
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okay, so this gonna sound like I’m gonna give you more homework but seriously…
It probably is, sorry in advance. But I have no idea why your WIP format look like that?
But in this format, there is no Setting therefor I can’t change the background to Black. White Background is a killer for the eyes. It kill any enjoyement in playing the game.
So, no pressure but when you get time? Can you fix that?
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@Cingulum_diaboli Honestly sometimes I’m giddy because I’m the writer of this story, so I won’t have to choose myself
@Mistyleaf123 There are plenty of interactions in this update, in both chapter one, three and four. And maybe some attempted murder.
@E_RedMark Don’t worry about it, I have had the same gripe myself. When I first uploaded the demo I fiddled with some of the aesthetic presets on dashingdon, which is why it looks like that. I haven’t changed it since. I won’t change it until the update drops because I don’t know where the preset code is inserted, and it could mess with the saves. Just two more weeks and I will revert it back to standard layout :>
I’m also planning on, once the update is out, to focus on the stats and aesthetic of the demo, see if I can’t make it just a touch more appealing. I really have to do my research here though because idk what HG will allow when it’s time for publishing. Otherwise there’s always twine… As I said, lots to think about.
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I have to finally say about this, because every time I read demo, it catches my attention. It’s about these kinds of pieces:
I think once it’s been mentioned what MC’s body is like, it’s not necessary to add that words so often later… otherwise it sounds kinda weird and funny 
Especially if it is described as “ordinary” or “lithe”.
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ordinary arse 
yeah, I also prefer to just get rid of them; I know what my MC’s body is gonna look like, and don’t exactly think the adjectives are needed!
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Lol, makes your skin crawl doesn’t it It’s a relic of a time when I was a sweet summer child, new to coding in writing, and thought oh, repeatable variables? (or whatever you call them?) And maybe I got a bit overzealous with it…The ‘ordinary’ one makes me particularly itchy.
Unfortunately I think the story will need many edits before it gets to a good state. But I have this marked down for my next edit pass! Thank you for letting me know :>
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