Really like this WIP! 
Only issue I had, as I’m trying to play as myself, I wouldn’t ask Sei to teach me how to shoot. I already know how to shoot. I would just ask to shoot with her. Maybe if the player has the “everything outdoors” hobby, then they could know how to shoot ahead of time? Maybe a bad suggestion, since I don’t really know where you plan on going with the MC. I have wondered why the MC HAS to be an artist, especially since some characters (like Sei, being an LEO) aren’t.
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