Your authors of this novel. Loki & Thor.
(I’m Loki here) - Thor is the editor.
I’m just including this picture till I have proper art done.
Odin’s Eye is a science fiction novel with fantasy elements woven into the story.
The story is set in the distant future of Earth after climate change went unaddressed. Humanity has very few options in front of it due to the severity of the weather. You play as a citizen living under a dome who has been given another shot at life. Will you become a god among the stars or will you lift humanity out of the coming dark age?
This WIP consists of:
The prologue, creation process, and most of the first chapter.
Each class has their own specific backstory scene.
*Game is not gender locked.
*Romances will not be gender locked.
-You will be able to romance characters such as:
Loki, Sif, Odin, Thor, Freya, Sigyn.
*Meaningful stat/skill choices.
I spent a bit of time developing a skill/stat system that will allow multiple ways to confront problems. I am building in a large level of replay ability so that your choices/profession/stats will give you access to new text beyond a superficial level.
*Game will be long and done in three installments. The first one will be between 1 - 6 chapters.
I expect to finish the rest of chapter 1 over the next week. Most of the game has been generally plotted out.
I’d love to hear feedback on pacing, story, romances, gender representation, and ideas about game play.
Please enjoy! This is my first attempt at a Choice Script game! I’m learning a lot and was a bit nervous in deciding to post this but figured what the hell.
Content thus far = PG-13.
-Classes changed - Primary 3 - Artist, Engineer, and Scientist.
-Intro reduced by 3000 words - Half of the creation process is gone now.
-Further spelling grammar updated.
-2 scenes beyond the temple.
You can advance the story right now as an Artist or an Engineer.
-Finishing Scientist backstory.
-Finishing skill/relationship list.
-Finishing continuation of battle and the end of chapter 1.
This is a pretty big update in my eyes. I rewrote much of the start, edited out a bunch of redundant text and fleshed out where I want to go with the story. The next update will be bigger.
I’d love feedback on the updated creation process, the flow of the story, and any suggestions.
-Scientist backstory scene added. Story can now continue with that class.
-Further grammar improvements
Continuation of Temple battle and the end of chapter 1.
*Run into a few problems with my *if statements checks. Most of them work. If you suddenly jump ahead to something you don’t quite get, that’s the reason. Resolving this soon.
I’d have finished and posted the update already but attending the women’s march, protesting, and a school final kinda got in the way. I’m 2/3 done with the next update