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this makes me think im Mr. Darko and there is 28 days 6 hours 42 minutes 12 seconds till the end of the world i have a understanding uncle and im going on a date…

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Lol, well I’m honored to get that kinda feeling across. A legendary piece of film, and the iconic song that goes with it SO awesome.

much thanks.

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Been wondering.
When I get to proof reading I’m also going to adjust a few things along the way, namely which stats are displayed. within the text.
EDIT:
Showing the stats when they change in the story body
showing the stats changed beside the choices you make
Showing in bold the things that are different because of the choices you’ve made

these are the things I’m debating on making visible or invisible.

Vitals are sanity will and health (thinking about doing away with health stat)
Socials are emotions, sanity, and relationships
if you choose others please let me know what you mean tanks!

  • All
  • Vitals
  • Socials,
  • All for the WIP
  • other

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Sry will edit it to be clear.

and LMAO!!! that is so awesome

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Instructions now clear. No longer stuck in washing machine :joy:

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Good now I can get my things out of there… HEY where’re my pants!

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Ollie grew up with you and… Jade. You never did tell Alice about that
second part but now you were telling {bf_him_gs} about the funny little
foreign kid you played with every day from the age of five to ten.

keep getting that little error in places, not sure whats causing it, but I think it should be refering to alice?

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Yeah its the code showing… mighta missed a piece, thanks.

when I sort out code I shorten thing like bestfriend to bf and gendershift to gs so I know what the code does to whom. YAY fun facts of Snoe’s coding process.

thanks for the heads up by the by
much luv

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I fixed it BUT as side effect you’ve got an early update!
DON’T look if you want the proper experience, but I wont stop you from taking a peak at the ‘nearly’ there version of chapter one. yeah yeah its getting long. Forgive the slow build up.

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Aaaaaand its reared its head again!

“What’s with you?” Alice raises a brow and crosses %{bf_his_gs} arms.

tryin to go thru this as a best I can since I’m keeping watch on 3 other posts, but I have to say I love the idea behind this. Keep up the good work.

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Ack!!! Damn percent dealy right beside the dollar sign Mudder bugger!

Tanks by the by

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Hey! I just wanted to say that the game is completely awesome! I just loved the way the gameplay is not completely linear.

I also wanted to correct a little mistake at the line were Ollie speaks to your MC:

“Having a rough time Lauren,ou já está/tá todo fudida?”

If the MC is female, the “todo” would be “toda”.

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Great story !!!

I look forward next update !

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Probably won’t happen for a bit. Snoe seems to be concentrating on their other WIP. If you liked this you should check the other one out if you haven’t already.

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Well, I like the plot. It’s quite intriguing. I like Alice a lot too, and the fact that we are opposites and yet drawn to each other. I hope to see this grow!

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Begone, Necromancers!

You have defiled the thread in which the dead lie!

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Dead no

Hibernating more apt… perhaps cryo sleep.
Jedi time meditation…
Ummm I’m outta cleverness

But I will eventually return… just not yet.

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This is a really great idea and very well done, can’t wait to see where it goes from here