Mommy, We Created a Plot Hole! [Rewrite in Progress]

Note: MWCAPH! has been rewritten. Please go to the new thread: Mommy, We Created a Plot Hole! (A Meta-fictional Adventure) [UPDATED Feb. 8, 2021]

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not cool, cousin patrick. you act like you canā€™t visit them :sweat_smile: that aside, itā€™s quite interesting and I look forward to read this story

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Iā€™m interested in this

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Nine year old is quite young, but hey, sounds fun. Iā€™m interested :smiley:

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This sounds amazing!

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It says your twin will be your opposite gender but what if youā€™re nonbinary?

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Sounds good Iā€™m keeping a look for the demo

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Well, I didnā€™t include the part where their parents are working on another country, and they were planning on bringing them along.

I was planning on making them eight but I guess thatā€™s a bit too young. :smiley: I donā€™t see any WIPs currently that are entirely focused about children. There are quite a few ones where you can play as one but theyā€™re only at the beginning and then Iā€™m like, ā€œWhy do I grow up so fast?ā€ :cry: Theyā€™re like the cutest scenes.

@Ant_Merf @GamerDude @Harley_Robin_Evans Thanks for the interest! :hugs:

Itā€™s opposite sex, so not necessarily gender. But Iā€™m not sure, is it fine to have you choose what your birth gender is? I think I can better explain when I show the context of the choice, but it will be implied only.


Does anyone have questions? Iā€™m eager to answer them!

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we live in the age of technology, cousin patrick. also planes exist.

Hahaha. But arenā€™t planes a little too expensive for a visit? And he canā€™t just start living with them too. Plus itā€™s just not the same, you know? Theyā€™re a huggy bunch. Heā€™s a single child who wanted to have siblings and now heā€™s worried theyā€™ll end up being distant to him like what happened to their parents.

but causing plot twist and endangering the children is a bit too much, isnā€™t it? when there are other less dangerous measures that could be done (them visiting him or he visit them, facetime, skypeā€¦)
if he wants to have siblings he couldā€¦likeā€¦ask his own parentsā€¦

He didnā€™t know a plot hole would occur in the first place, or that he even created one. Why that happens isā€¦ Oh, I shouldnā€™t give spoilers away this early. :stuck_out_tongue:

His parents are too old for that and donā€™t want another especially when the twins started living with them.

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This sounds absolutely adorable!

Are the twinsā€™ names locked to Wayne and Roselyna?

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Nope! Theyā€™re actually major characters. Youā€™ll get to play as their friends/classmates.


Anyway, I want to ask people, how do you view puppy love/crushes? How much can you tolerate without it getting too uncomfortable? What do you think about kissing on the cheeks? On the lips? How about pretend weddings? Iā€™m thinking thereā€™d be quite a few kisses on the cheeks (you can already do that with your twin) and maybe on the lips (at the end/depends on the character), but thatā€™s about it. Nothing too :smirk: if you know what I mean.

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Wait, so what does that mean? Our PCs are supporting characters? :thinking:


I personally think itā€™s cute, but it really depends on the age of the people involved. If theyā€™re nine, then cheeks are fine, lips are :face_with_raised_eyebrow:, and pretend weddings are a mix of :joy: + :innocent: + :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:.

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No, the PCs take the place of Wayne and Roselyna. Theyā€™re mostly still the same characters, but they have different roles now. So what happens to them in the novel now happens to your characters.

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i agree with @violet but have mixed feelings about pretend weddings

I think it would be fine to leave the pretend wedding as a choice if I ever decide to include it (I probably will).


Since Iā€™m getting questions about how customizable are the PCsā€¦

Letā€™s seeā€¦ you can rename them, choose your appearance (stuff like hair, clothes, height and body shape), and the twin dynamics (whoā€™s the older one, more dominant, talkative, emotional, whether you are competitive/supportive with each other, and even a secret twin language).

The twin has more limited appearance options (theyā€™re more generalized instead of specific), and have a mostly set personality. I tried giving the option of setting their personality too but thatā€™s TOO many variables when you already have lots of personality stats.

I like customization. :smile:

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if that ainā€™t me

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Thanks @Franzinyte ! Iā€™m excited for the demo!

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Oh man, I loved this so much I had to make an account just to tell you! I think it was the twin thing and customization that drew me in :smiley: I love customization! Really curious how this will turn out (and super excited once I noticed you had three books planned lol)

I think crushes are cute! As long as they donā€™t start waxing poetic about how much they love someone. They are only nine lol. Obviously it depends on the kidā€™s personality, but around that age youā€™ll still get the ā€œweā€™ll get married when weā€™re olderā€ and ā€œweā€™ll always be togetherā€ stuff, but itā€™s neither infantile like preschool/Kindergarten age nor on the level of maturity of middle school age. Itā€™s meaningful but not the same sort of ā€œmeaningfulā€ as an adult or older teenager would describe it. Hope that makes a bit of sense? I was kinda precocious though, so someone else might have a different viewpoint.

Cheek kisses are perfectly fine. To be honest, back when I was eight/nine I had a pair of classmates who had been dating since second grade. They kissed on the mouth sometimes, but it was just like a quick peck. Super innocent. I donā€™t really mind something like that, especially with pretend weddings (just donā€™t be like little four-year-old me and try to kiss Mommy like you saw Daddy doing, yikes!). Maybe hugs and hand holding, too? I distinctly remember that all of the couples in my elementary school would hold hands more than anything else.

Welp, that was long. Itā€™s fun to think about how you felt when you were younger though! Anyway, best of luck with the demo! Iā€™m super excited for it!

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