Note: MWCAPH! has been rewritten. Please go to the new thread: Mommy, We Created a Plot Hole! (A Meta-fictional Adventure) [UPDATED Feb. 8, 2021]
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not cool, cousin patrick. you act like you canāt visit them that aside, itās quite interesting and I look forward to read this story
Iām interested in this
Nine year old is quite young, but hey, sounds fun. Iām interested
This sounds amazing!
It says your twin will be your opposite gender but what if youāre nonbinary?
Sounds good Iām keeping a look for the demo
Well, I didnāt include the part where their parents are working on another country, and they were planning on bringing them along.
I was planning on making them eight but I guess thatās a bit too young. I donāt see any WIPs currently that are entirely focused about children. There are quite a few ones where you can play as one but theyāre only at the beginning and then Iām like, āWhy do I grow up so fast?ā Theyāre like the cutest scenes.
@Ant_Merf @GamerDude @Harley_Robin_Evans Thanks for the interest!
Itās opposite sex, so not necessarily gender. But Iām not sure, is it fine to have you choose what your birth gender is? I think I can better explain when I show the context of the choice, but it will be implied only.
Does anyone have questions? Iām eager to answer them!
we live in the age of technology, cousin patrick. also planes exist.
Hahaha. But arenāt planes a little too expensive for a visit? And he canāt just start living with them too. Plus itās just not the same, you know? Theyāre a huggy bunch. Heās a single child who wanted to have siblings and now heās worried theyāll end up being distant to him like what happened to their parents.
but causing plot twist and endangering the children is a bit too much, isnāt it? when there are other less dangerous measures that could be done (them visiting him or he visit them, facetime, skypeā¦)
if he wants to have siblings he couldā¦likeā¦ask his own parentsā¦
He didnāt know a plot hole would occur in the first place, or that he even created one. Why that happens isā¦ Oh, I shouldnāt give spoilers away this early.
His parents are too old for that and donāt want another especially when the twins started living with them.
This sounds absolutely adorable!
Are the twinsā names locked to Wayne and Roselyna?
Nope! Theyāre actually major characters. Youāll get to play as their friends/classmates.
Anyway, I want to ask people, how do you view puppy love/crushes? How much can you tolerate without it getting too uncomfortable? What do you think about kissing on the cheeks? On the lips? How about pretend weddings? Iām thinking thereād be quite a few kisses on the cheeks (you can already do that with your twin) and maybe on the lips (at the end/depends on the character), but thatās about it. Nothing too if you know what I mean.
Wait, so what does that mean? Our PCs are supporting characters?
I personally think itās cute, but it really depends on the age of the people involved. If theyāre nine, then cheeks are fine, lips are , and pretend weddings are a mix of + + .
No, the PCs take the place of Wayne and Roselyna. Theyāre mostly still the same characters, but they have different roles now. So what happens to them in the novel now happens to your characters.
i agree with @violet but have mixed feelings about pretend weddings
I think it would be fine to leave the pretend wedding as a choice if I ever decide to include it (I probably will).
Since Iām getting questions about how customizable are the PCsā¦
Letās seeā¦ you can rename them, choose your appearance (stuff like hair, clothes, height and body shape), and the twin dynamics (whoās the older one, more dominant, talkative, emotional, whether you are competitive/supportive with each other, and even a secret twin language).
The twin has more limited appearance options (theyāre more generalized instead of specific), and have a mostly set personality. I tried giving the option of setting their personality too but thatās TOO many variables when you already have lots of personality stats.
I like customization.
Oh man, I loved this so much I had to make an account just to tell you! I think it was the twin thing and customization that drew me in I love customization! Really curious how this will turn out (and super excited once I noticed you had three books planned lol)
I think crushes are cute! As long as they donāt start waxing poetic about how much they love someone. They are only nine lol. Obviously it depends on the kidās personality, but around that age youāll still get the āweāll get married when weāre olderā and āweāll always be togetherā stuff, but itās neither infantile like preschool/Kindergarten age nor on the level of maturity of middle school age. Itās meaningful but not the same sort of āmeaningfulā as an adult or older teenager would describe it. Hope that makes a bit of sense? I was kinda precocious though, so someone else might have a different viewpoint.
Cheek kisses are perfectly fine. To be honest, back when I was eight/nine I had a pair of classmates who had been dating since second grade. They kissed on the mouth sometimes, but it was just like a quick peck. Super innocent. I donāt really mind something like that, especially with pretend weddings (just donāt be like little four-year-old me and try to kiss Mommy like you saw Daddy doing, yikes!). Maybe hugs and hand holding, too? I distinctly remember that all of the couples in my elementary school would hold hands more than anything else.
Welp, that was long. Itās fun to think about how you felt when you were younger though! Anyway, best of luck with the demo! Iām super excited for it!