Merry Crisis (WIP) - Updated: 7 Jan '25 [300k words]

while there is 3 types of vegitarians in my mind and im not any. i would agree that 2 of those types would not want to cook meat and with 1 of those 2 only cook meat for family with protest at worst.

1 would be willing to cook meat for family, probably only family but not eat it, maybe be unhappy they had to cook it.

1 would just not cook meat. not even for family

1 would not only not cook meat but not tolerate meat eating within sight of them. or even allow smelling of meat cooking within their presence even if it was a bbq down the road. (not really a vegitarian or vegan in my eyes but a insane person)

note im not denouncing Vegans or vegitarians. im agreeing and explaining meaning
but i am denouncing the less sane ones while explaining they to are a type. the first two are sane.

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Hahaa agreed with both of you here. It would be funny that the reason why MC keeps burning the turkey is because they’re vegetarian. But yes, in all seriousness, i’ll add an alternative in the next update :slight_smile:

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Well I’m a vegetarian from India, I consume neither meat nor eggs, and whilst I’m a bit repulsed by the sight and smell of it due to my upbringing, I don’t think it makes sense for me to try and convince other people to not consume meat around me, especially strangers, tho if it was a friend at school or something then I’d tell them to not eat meat around me, that’s pretty common amongst vegetarians in India so they don’t mind that.

That said I do get your point about people who try and force strangers to not consume meat just to accommodate them

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Hi! I don’t know if these have been reported already but here’s some things I found that need fixing.

shouldn’t say line break there.

here the choices don’t seem to match the text?

Additionally, I got the option to text both Qiu and Shay for boxing and lunch. Said yes to both of them. Only got the Qiu section before it took me straight to the winter fair.

the code seeped in here.

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Hey all! Realized my cogdemos link was broken before. Have updated it on the main post, and you can access it here too.

Progress is being made on the second last chapte and I hope to have it ready next month.

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Thanks for update and as always take your time.

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Early Singapore shoutout poggers

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I just realised its the setting xD. As a Singapore America student, very cool :hand_with_index_finger_and_thumb_crossed:

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Heh, came across a picture of a rather cute Asian model that immediately made me think of our sporty boy Shay, the muscles that tattoos that rebel mischief “bad boy” type of smirk. :heart_eyes:


And this could be my mc, probably a few weeks after his mandatory military service ended and he’s preparing to return to the US:

Also a case of real life writing the plot a bit but with the new Trump administration returning to Singapore is starting to look more appealing for mc here in spite of how difficult it still is to be gay in Singapore if you’re not both wealthy and willing and able to quietly fly under the radar. :worried:

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@idonotlikeusernames hahah love the folks you’ve found for Shay and MC, and love that you’ve been so loyal to Shay all these years haha.

@Happyteddypig haha yay hello!! Glad you found this game :slight_smile:

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I promise that once this thing releases I’ll commit to making a second mc for proper romancing the pants of off Qiu run. As for my main, lead singer, mc sorry Carl but he totally ships Joony and Qiu (JooniQ, you can even pronounce it is unique) now and he’ll always have a soft spot for Qiu too, but the time when he was madly in love with Qiu is over. As the mc themselves can say Qiu’s unwillingness to fight for them when it mattered did hurt and yeah it did take my main mc years to finally get over Qiu and now he’s finally in a better place emotionally, if not quite yet career-wise.

Speaking as a reader of your work now, I find it fascinating how Qiu, Shay and my main mc are all in some sense the tragic products of how Singaporean society treats LGBTQ people.

Oh and I also encountered a bug, when choosing to meet Qiu in the coffee shop the mc returns to the restaurant where the class reunion is, even though my mc didn’t go to the reunion.

And a repeat of my previous request if you’ll consider moving some of the covers, including Grandma got run over by a reindeer, from the beginning of the set of Shay and his band to the end again so the mc can (co)lead sing those covers with Shay and the band again. The headcanon where mc’s brother and mother both will not let that go for many Christmases to come is too good to give up, particularly should that be mc’s first performance video to go viral in much of Asia and maybe globally, depending on the success stat for singer mc. :pleading_face:

The new version of the band scene isn’t bad per se but I liked the old one better where mc was on stage with Shay and his band for a bit longer and sung in some of the covers as well, instead of just doing one of their own songs. The new scene feels more formal and somewhat out of tune with the loose holiday vibe the old one had. I also miss from the old version the part where, dependent on success, a handful of people from the crowd could already recognize the mc, that was flattering and a nice reward for upping career success as a singer.

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HOLY. Crap.

Been a while, and now re-playing after a time, I ran the whole “doth protests too much” with Qiu, just wanting to be friends even when you keep running into them every chance you get.

Class reunion.

Lunch shenanigans.

Their apartment.

Then you get down to Qiu finally just vomitting everything they felt they should have like yearssss… ago, and you keep eating food together. They try to be innocuous but honest, but end up dropping too many hints, and MANNNN… does it feel so desperate and heartbreaking because they’re both trying too say so much. Yet, they’re both still kind of stunted from their history together, and the things they were unable to communicate with one another (at least, Qiu, mostly).

THAT OPTION.

OMG.

Where you decide to be wholly selfish and just tell Qiu to tell you that “I love you.”

OMG.

And they do it! They do it! Not like…okay, sure…they checked off the relationship box, and hooray.

Qiu’s face turns all soft and tender with hope and penance, and they tell you exactly what you want to hear. OMG. Legs twiddling and kicking madly as I laughed and cheered for fictional characters.

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I feel like the platonic part of being platonic soulmates with Qiu disappears pretty quick when you go to reconcile. Why are there potential kiss scenes? Why is my MC apparently acting like the two of them were romantic ships in the night? No, we were platonic! MC just wanted their friend back, where’s all this romance coming from?

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These scenes rekindling romance with Qiu got me all giddy. Im reading while kicking my feet and cheesing real hard.

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True. I was expecting transition being dicuss more in depth with Qiu. Qiu mom didnt call it out either when we got caught kissing.

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You have no idea how surprised I was to find a Singapore based story. It’s so relatable and a little uncanny. I’m downright laughing at all the quirky unique Singapore traits mentioned everywhere. Thanks so much for the story! Can’t wait for more!

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@J_N Totally see hat you’re saying - in the latest edits, I wanted to prune some of these branches so it doesn’t end up being too unwieldy for me to keep track of all the ways MC can potentially feel about Qiu in the past.

@AwkwardNature Aww very happy you feel that way!! :smiley:

You’re right! In the latest edit that I’ll eventually be releasing (I’ve been trying to address this and give MC/Qiu more time to discuss this :slight_smile: )

@RiversEdge Ahh!! So happy you found it relatable, and enjoyed the little Singapore easter-eggs/references throughout the IF. This means so much to me!! Can’t wait to release the next chapter and see what you guys think too!


Teasers for Ubin :slight_smile:

I’ve made solid progress on the Ubin Chapter this month, and I feel like I’ve written something I’m proud of at last!

I’m planning to release 3 ‘teaser’ snippets in October (Nat, Qiu, Shay) first for ko-fi/patreon supporters, then to the public! Here’s the schedule:

  • 4 Oct: Nat

  • 11 Oct: Qiu (public release of Nat’s snippet)

  • 18 Oct: Shay (public release of Qiu’s snippet)

  • 25 Oct: (public release of Shay’s snippet)

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