I recently started writing my first interactive novel and due to my inexperience I need feedback. This would serve to help me see if the general concept (I am working with), my writing, and other aspects of the project are both functional and enjoyable.
Lex Talionis draws inspiration from multiple sources, though most notably My Hero Academia and Teen Titans. The first entry (Exordium) into the multi-part series, follows a metahuman about to enroll at one of the world’s most prestigious hero universities, Herculean University. Though their motivations are far different than the usual ones that bring students to it, they see the university as a means to an end. One that will provide them with the skills and opportunity necessary to avenge the murder of their father that took place many years ago.