I’m glad you liked it! Thanks for catching the bugs. Also, this story now has its own thread here in case you stumble upon more issues.
Funny how the setting was initially inspired by Naruto, but ended up kinda similar to ATLA anyway (well, Naruto and DnD. Sun abilities are basically Abjuration+Force magic).
Probably a remnant of the old draft, which was written in a gender-neutral manner. I’ll look into it.