Haven’t played the yp in ages, but loved playing it again Just have a few questions and typos:
I think I saw they’ll be five books in total? Is it the case that they’ll all be released at once, rather than one at a time?
When you’re asked if you’re attracted to Arthur or anyone else at the start, maybe have a more middle option between you really like him/definitely don’t like him or an unsure option.
Playing a passive/submissive mc, just wondering if you’re not direct with Morgana choosing options such as that you’re interested in her at the beginning of part two change her interactions with you?
In book 2 when Arthur is with Duchess Tilda after the game talks about Lancelot’s abscences “smile doesn’t reach his eyes. These days, he doesn’t smile as readily he used to” *as he used to
when Meligaunt is in my room, chose he must have taken my necklace “what if one of one of the sheep ate it?” *delete one of the "one of"s
Chose for Morgana to look for spells in my room, after Morgana says sheep can’t climb downstairs “I can’t tell you what a relief it is to be around someone who’s willing to acknowedge what an idiot Arthur can be. " *acknowledge
"alarm-bell sounds. I go to the window and look, with with Ryo-ohki at my heels.” *remove one of the "with"s
Chose to try and trip Meligaunt "At least Meligaunt seems more frustated and careless now. " *frustrated
"Meligaunt’s frustration drives him to a more desparate move. A guard with " *desperate
"Lady Morgana, I very much regret the neccessity that led to your involvement, but please " *necessity
"a lot better, and it’s good to see Ryo-ohki eating contentedy and looking " *contentedly