Chapter four is the end of the current demo
playd the new updates version its looking better each time i play it p.s oops wrong game that happened in a diffrant game i thinking of my bad for mixing up diffrant games
Okay just updated the game with the rest of chapter 3b
[choicescript_stats line 19: Non-existent variable ‘temper’] when trying to open stat page.
Oi there @AMER1CANN1NJA09 you should add save function. And the stat page error that’s mentioned in above comment by @0roxson0 is there.
And an obvious flaw is that the first choice is MC’ gender male or female but the next is to choose which gender MC is interested in but even if I choose female and then Eric is selected the romance option is there and voce versa, even if I selected male and then went with Hannah or Scarlett then the romance option is there.
Also @AMER1CANN1NJA09 what are the obvious/average height of ROs?
please explain
Cause if it’s like normal human height like 5’5" to 6’2" then even with 9’5" MC it will be like giant with a kid and 14’0" MC will look like a giant with a barbie doll.
I mean it’s already said that Eric was 5’9" but slouching makes him look like 5’6"… So, 14’0" tall MC with 5’6" guy looks and sounds weird it’s more than twice the guy’ height. That image in my head look like a kid with a doll… I hope you have some nice explanation of perception or something.
And I know that you never even fixed even a single mistake I mentioned so far but still.
mentioned it many times
Also before you say that you fixed it, I mentioned this many times and it’s still the same, who wad that MC threw that punch at? And when MC is already got changed into gym clothes and is outside the locker room how and why are they back in locker room and changing again?
After so many playthroughs I just realised this,
detail
this Wendy girl is likely a normal one, so she would be around 5’5" to 5’10" at best, so how the hell can she even think or try to grab 14’0" MC’ throat? Does MC and their people looks normal height outside their home place?
To answer your question about the height differences. The MC’s people can make themselves appear smaller than they really are
No that is correct. But I am unable to fix the bugs right now. Currently away from home
…ok thats strange that didn’t come up in any the sentences last time i playd the game.
might as well ask since nobody else bother to ask first so guess i am first one to ask were you at at the moment?.,since you said you not at home you musta gone on vacation or gone out somewhere with you family.
Germany
I didn’t understand quite a lot of things in the demo and there’s a few mistakes but a little polishing and more content will definitely make this a great read.
Also you could try dwelling more into the details. The pov switchings are too random and that gets confusing too.
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