Hell,we don’t even need to do it with our fists.Maybe you could zap his face with lightning powers,use your psychic powers to make a fist out of thin air and then punch him with it,or you could just get one of your shadow tendrils to bitch slap him.
So, um, hi. I just wanted to say that I love this WIP. Also I noticed a few mistakes (sorry):
Get rid of this idiots.
Get rid of these idiots.
At the time you became Blackbird, he was already GlamoursSidekick.
At the time you became Blackbird, he was already Glamour’ssidekick.
followed by a shout; “Hands up and don’t move!” You rather hear before you see the guns that must be trained at you.
followed by a shout; “Hands up and don’t move!” that you hear before you see the guns that must be trained at you.
The sound of gunshots fill the room and autocratically you narrow your eyes at the newcomer.
The sound of gunshots fills the room and you autocratically narrow your eyes at the newcomer.
What the hell do they think are doing?
What the hell do they think they’re doing?
You glare at the men, who by now realized that their meagre projectiles are not going to do you any harm.
You glare at the men, who’ve by now realized that their meager projectiles are not going to do you any harm.
The only one getting hurt are you idiots
The only ones getting hurt are you idiots
Well I’m not opposed to it…but I’m also not opposed to MC giving their costume a more catlike design just to “irritade” Troy (and because some MCs really don’t know how to not be suspicious)…
My MC purposely strives for this. He doesn’t try hiding his identity under an alias or whatnot. He wants Troy to find out so that he can then flash him a very dangerous grin. I swear, it’s hard not to play as an MC that harbors ill feelings towards Troy. My guy can’t help it.
Some MCs live out their obsession for their replacement by trying to really badly hurt him…others just get really stupid ideas to ensure some attention…
And yes, it is suspicious and a very stupid idea…but hey my MC already gave Troy their real name when he asked so I guess they certainly want someone to figure out their secret.
(to be completely fair my MC wouldn’t change their costume but they would certainly entertain the thought if they should buy one of those cute hats with cat ears…)
I have the perfect way to tell Troy your secret identity.
You and Troy are sitting in a cafe,with Ace sleeping at Troys foot.
MC:Soo…you don’t recognize me?
Troy:W-what?
MC:Oh come on.Surely by now,you would’ve realized who I am.
Troy:Listen,I just met you on the street,how am I supposed to know- Troy doesn’t get to finish his sentence though,as you punch him in the jaw,sending him backwards and falling onto the floor.
Troy:Ohh…it’s you… The MC flashes a grin at him.
MC:Damn straight.
Gee I just wanted to be mean to Troy, but then I imagined slapping him and I felt so bad xD I only want to tease him, poor Troy, stop hitting him gfdsgfdsgf