Freak: Amidst the Neon Lights WIP and playtest.... last update July 4th 2019

Psst, might want to reserve a few posts to lump them(entries) all together(if anyone else posts from here)
i do hope more ppl join though :smiley:

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I link’ed all the entries so far into the main body. the rest will fall naturally under the voting post:)

I’ve made more progress, in revisions. The core story is intact but I’ve added some flourish and removed awkward sounds ect…

I’ve made it to the Shuffle shuffle after you meet Silic for the first time. of the story.

Let me know what you all think of the modifications, and if anything seems out of place. I really want this story to be solid.

Here’s hoping its an improvement.

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do I need to post my sheet there too?

um… hang on…

it went from this


to this

but then to this

what happened to us being on ice? and… we haven’t met Silic yet

Another accidental Nudge.

Some bits of text went AWOL while stream lining stuff. Should be fine now, let me know.

and no you don’t need to repost because ALL of the chara sheets made in ‘this’ post were transfered over. UNLESS you’ve made edits. and if you do make edits do so to your original chara sheet

everything’s working fine now. :+1: nice job

anyways… I’ll delete my post on the other topic, no need for that anymore…

Cool note I’ve decided on what to do with the Secrets section of the stats!

F&S news!!! Aka baseless tabloid news. Rumors and scandals. Which hero is sleeping with whom plots schemes Jobs romances and everything you’d like to know but don’t need to know within the course of the actual story.

And yes they will have some stories involving the MC that may or may not be true.

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:smiling_imp: I like where these points are going :smiling_imp:

‘Late last night Freak icon Vyde was seen with a mysterious new friend and old flame Silic… is this a budding love triangle?’

Lols

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Female high level Swig Idea
Morrigan Vight. Magician with biker style Telekinetic.
Or
Lolipop. Air compression and concussion force. Air bubbles with the force of bombs… large bombs.

  • Morrigan
  • Lolipop

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Gotta say though, Lollipop’s an interesting and surprisingly relevant name.

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When I heard District I thought to myself “Hunger games but with superhero’s?”

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Yeah consider her an eccentric actress. Fun bubbly violent sense of humor. Dislikes Vyde and lives fame and attention. Think airhead personality with a Trump like brain.

Also one of the few people that likes Silic as a person they’re besties

Not quite lols

The island is divided between five Icons.

Morrigan on the other hand is a bad ass magician with next level psychokinesis/telekinesis. And runs her magic act as a borderline strip show.

Forward hotheaded and unwilling to conform to public opinion or politically correctness. Gets along with Vyde.

So you corrected the misspelling that was reported to you that you flat out denied?

That’ll be my MC with all the people if the option presents itself :grin:

Also if Lolipop wins her dress style should totally be Harajuku girl :smiley:

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I was being political lol
If I fix it when no one’s looking it never happened. But yeah that was an oops moment.
EDIT:I denied it???

Yeah been playing with the idea of the Asian look. Keep it silly for the cameras but when they drop she’s all American business woman ala Lucy liu

Yeah I thought a mini tabloid would fit nicely with the current subject matter

Hmm depends how you want to write the character. I think it’d be a more fun character if she kept the Harajuku style all the time. Kind of like Harley Quinn. Juxtapose the silly/flighty/girly look of Harajuku fashion with the “cave your face in” of her powers and combat ability.

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