Freak: Amidst the Neon Lights WIP and playtest.... last update July 4th 2019

thought you guys didn’t want to know yet.

oh right… then… keep it safe then :+1:

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no worries, I’m willing to tell but only under consensus and not spoiling for everyone.

same goes for most powered individuals I like sharing ideas.

ITS THE ROYAL RUMBLE!!!

Today’s Match is… The main character in this game vs… Rico from just cause 3!

Who will win, find out soon!

half a day late there buddy hehe

I actually really liked this WIP, also liked the character creation and how you explained the MC’s personality choices. Nice and nice all around.

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Tankya
Running through some revisions today and tomorrow by the by so expect a few changes, but the path of the story will remain.

Note to my friendly edit-nistas (think fashionistas of grammar) I’ve done revisions UP TO the ‘Moverstyle’ choice will continue tomorrow.

Am using @LordOfLA 's read aloud method.

Hey @snoe, you do know that Notepad++ has a spell checker right? even though it updated and was removed from the original files, you can still download it

just copy the DLL to the plug in directories and download a variety languages from the notepad + + plug in tab settings for the DSpellCheck and viola… and you can easily turn it on and off…

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Smexy! Rawr! Eep! *Runs off and hides!

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WAIT A MINUTE!!! I JUST REALIZED SOMETHING!!!.. @SNOE… YOU’RE ALSO CANADIAN?!

Are you in Toronto?! because I’m currently in North York!

You’re a real live Yorkian :slight_smile:

I’m near south somewheres abouts.

You were awake at 6am doing corrections?!

EDIT: goes to both Snoe and @MichaelMaxwell

Insomnia yay.

Can’t sleep I write… or do something comparable

from what i seen and read so far very interesting game so far
i think about as clueless as the MC about whats going on around him right now.
also way too bring the action with the plane thing that was something.

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Thankya bob!

I wanted to pick a spot that was risky even for ‘powerful’ individuals. So many things can go wrong and it takes ‘skill’ to sneak on and takeover impressing upon the reader how bad-ass Silic is.

Wake up somewhere safe and its no different than waking up in the morning really.

thanks again, I love hearing opinions it really fuels my urge to do this whole thing justice.

general notes

I think I broke a record or something!! 4 days up and 33 likes!! thats insane from what I’ve seen.

On my revision pass I’m also elaborating on the stats and pointing them out when they’re put to use and upgraded. ( in this case in build choices) You’ll notice which build increases your baseline abilities

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I wasn’t doing correction…@snoe was… I was working on something with choice script… and I fell asleep on top of my desk… again…

I’m actually from BC, Vancouver to be exact. I’m just in the city for the Christmas market with my GF :blush: and to watch the Holiday Magic at Bloor-Yorkville… I won’t stay for long tho :disappointed: I need to get back and continue my work after new year…

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Hey Snoe~
Got a “Startupline 463: increasing indent not allowed, expected 0 was 1” after choosing the body type.

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K give a minute musta nudged it while working

EDIT: Fixed it, “*comment revision marker” so I could find where I left off.

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I’ve built a thread specifically for the Contest and where the vote and the collection of powered folks are displayed for easy access.

https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/cameo-contest-freak-amidst-the-neon-lights/13817?u=snoe

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