@Samuel_H_Young
I always read it as you saying your thoughts (or at least part of it) out loud without realizing it
or like the emotion written on your face kind of thing
@aurumcelest
But it’s not seperated by paragraphs and I don’t think the MC would do that ALL the time. Like when the MC insults the orc, there are no quotations and no lines between the supposed dialogue. This seems to be the case nearly everytime, and there are hardly ever any indicators that the MC has related these thoughts to anyone but himself.
Five stars from me! Loved the twistiness at the end.
Also, I’m kinda confused about why the corruption bar rises because of things I was never given a choice of how to do. You explained it before, but it doesn’t explain why we are required to be so barbaric and sadistic about all our attacks. I feel like we should be given choices of how to act, instead of having them thrust upon us.
And sorry if it seems like I’m spamming you; I’m doing so because I enjoy the story and I want to help it improve. The main thing is that I feel like my character is almost 100% the opposite of me, and nothing I do can effect that. I realize that you’ve decided upon a set personality, but I think I should at least be able to choose my own actions.
Awesome game.
Also, after about 5 pages (when you first meat Patch) I’m very shocked that I still haven’t had a new choice.
Also…I didn’t choose to get drunk, but I keep berating myself for doing so.
And now Patch is angry at me for something that I was forced to do. o_o I mean, I would have helped the elf either way, but this is really jarring. It feels like The Prodigy.
I just wanna ask, cos it’s getting positive reviews, is this game that worth it? I’ve played the beta and i liked it, but i’m hesitating XD sorry @MultipleChoice but you have no idea how much i wanna buy it right now i just need a shove in the right direction XD
Congrats @MultipleChoice
@MultipleChoice Congratulations! I just brought it from the UK App Store, and it’s amazing so far!
@MultipleChoice What is the total word count? Good luck, mate!
I posted this in the WIP thread but it’s out on Chrome:
@Taiho it says ‘PRICE NOT AVAILABLE’ What is this?! :’(
@trollhunterthethirdtrollhunterthethird
I bought it about 5 minutes ago. Try searching chrome for it then, maybe something is wrong with the link.
@Taiho Hmm…strange it does not show up in my Chrome Search, gosh today is the worst day to have problems with Chrome!
Already bought on android. I enjoy your work. maybe its my preference, but cant seem to enjoy the way stats work. If only your the stat work individually , then i can make my choice better. Well at least it got me hook up to finish it. Nice one! (Guess once the apps release you cant change the way stat work anymore right? Just asking )
Darn…gotta wait…tooo excited…
@xNaomi
If only I could draw like that! I commissioned a Japanese artist to do the artwork. He is amazing.
@Samuel
I believe we’ve spoken at length about our stylistic/narrative differences in the WiP thread. I’d be more than willing to continue that discussion through PMs or Facebook chat.
@attolia, @GameOver, @Morgan_R, @eqs189, @Amith_Shaju, @Atramedesx, @Taiho
Thanks for the kind words everyone! You’ve made my day.
@kazumakiryu I fell in love with how Choice of Dragons implemented their “vs.” stat. It is a personal stylistic choice. Also, I’m glad Fatehaven got you to sign up. Welcome to the forums!
@Moderators Could one of you awesome people update my original post with the following links? If that’s possible I’d really appreciate it! [-O<
AppStore:
Chrome Web Store:
I’ll have to purchase it tonight! And @MultipleChoice, from what I’ve read of your story, and based on you estimating a 4 hour reading length, I really support the $2.99 pricing. I feel like high quality games, whether official CoG or HG, are worth at least that amount, if not a dollar more.
Hopefully customers will get used to the high quality HGs being set at this price point.
Sozin’s Comet, Infinity Loops, Cat Maids and more than a few D&D references. There’s a lot to like in this.
Another good CoG. Huzzah!
Edit: Found a small spelling mistake in the “Punishment” ending.
But Binyo i salso a sucker when it comes to dwarven weapons
Should be is also, right?