Eschaton: The Rebirth (WIP) - Experience three different stories based on your choices! [Updated: July 28, 2024]

Hello, everyone!

Back in 2018 I posted an admittedly unpolished and severely underdeveloped snippet of a WIP called, “The Soul of God.” Back then, it got quite a lot of attention, way more than what I was expecting and, despite my shortcomings and inexperience, I was welcomed and cheered on.

I come back now, six years later, having even written and published a physical, traditional book (yey!), wanting to once again try my hand at ChoiceScript. At the moment progress is slow, unfortunately, as life gets in the way as life tends to do when you get older, and I can’t promise updates weekly, though this is a project I’ve been toying around with for about a month and a half.

What I bring is something close to the original idea of my previous WIP, though far more complex. The Soul of God would see the male gender-locked Ocelot face down hordes of biblical demons and angels in order to save his world, with alignment choices inspired by Shin Megami Tensei thrown into the mix. Eschaton: The Rebirth follows a close pattern, where angels and demons are attacking your world, and the fate of the world falls on your lap. The first chapter is linear, with few choices, though the choices that you have available for you are extremely important as they define what story you will continue reading. This story will feature three separate routes, each with different (but similar) stories, where your character will develop a different personality and values depending on the route that you end up getting. No matter the route that you decide to read, you will be presented with alignment choices and combat will be somewhat linear, with the first combat encounter locking you to only allow your preferred stats, while every other encounter can and will lead to death if you do not approach combat with your stats in mind.

Having said all that, I will be focusing on one route at a time, and if you end up going down one of the two routes not being worked on at the moment, you will be notified that you’ve reached the end of that route so far. The current WIP features a completed Chapter 1, and the beginning of Chapter 2, with a combat encounter. At the end of the combat encounter, during the climax of it all (it will be obvious when you get there), the game will not allow you to proceed further.

If you would like to try out the WIP, here is the link: https://dashingdon.com/play/fromtheashes/eschaton-the-rebirth/mygame/

If you have any questions, suggestions, or ideas of what else I should include in this post, please do let me know, and I hope you enjoy what I am working on!

July 6, 2024 (Spoilers ahead!)
  • Save Feature added to Dashingdon!

  • Multiple typo corrections.

  • There are two secret names that, if typed out as your character’s name, will provide you with a boost to one of your stats and change your initial alignment.

  • Whenever you meet Brynn, Kumiro and Azuri again, their profiles should update on the Stats page to reflect their rebirth, with new achievements to go along with it.

  • Chapter 2 [Brahma] is completed. Do let me know what you think!

July 28, 2024 (Spoilers ahead!)
  • Chapter 2 [Shiva] is now complete and available! In the middle of writing chapter 3 for the Brahma route, I felt like I had enough notes backed up to fully write Shiva’s second chapter. Do let me know what you think! Shiva’s route is purposefuly slower and there are some hidden achievements that you get in Brahma’s route that you do not yet receive in Shiva’s. Patience is key!

  • Shiva’s fights are violent and desperate. Tell me if you like the way it was written, or if you believe it could have been harsher, or milder.

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You had me at shin megami tensei!! One of my favorite game series.

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Thank you, I will definitely look into adding the save feature on Dashingdon!

I would like to ask, did you find the quotation marks tiring only on the choices? Were you fine with them being used to represent dialogue?

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It was only for the choices! But it can also be justified as a style choice and the story really captivated me to the point that it didn’t bother me that much.

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I will take that into consideration going forward, thank you for your kind words!

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Really good. I love being OP. Love the direction so far. Keep it up!

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Will we have the option of unarmed combat? I like shiva’s path and think it fits him the most. And im envious of brynn. I wanted the purple eyes/energy so bad😭. I like it so far cant wait for shivas path😁

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Just like Brahma, Shiva has a unique weapon (Trishula, the trident that you use in his scene), however unarmed combat is definitely something that I, too, wanted to add somewhere along the routes! Thank you for the suggestion!

I’ll have to consider who to tackle after Brahma’s, maybe even make a poll if this gets enough attention ahah

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You had my curiosity. Now, you have my attention.

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Vengeance wasted the potential to Fuse Aogami and Tsukuyomi
Change my mind

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By chance do you have a Discord channel or what not so we can follow your work?

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I do not ahah, for now the forum is the only way to get updates on this story, though I do appreaciate the interest!

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A shame, I will definitely be keeping an eye on your game then. Thank you for the response!!

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Looks interesting and pretty unique. I’ll be keeping an eye on this…

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It just in my opinion in this dark universe author write it’s better to act as counterbalance thus Vishnu path.

While Brahma is the head of Trimurti because he is in the creator, the right is Vishnu while left is Shiva, he is acting as mediator/moderator between the two because the two can trust him to pass just verdict. At least that’s how it goes.

But in this story world is literally in apocalyptic period (destruction phase) so what world need is Preserver (Vishnu), the enemy is also Demons as Vishnu hate demons, in fact Vishnu kills demon, Vishnu really picky when giving blessing, however when he does give blessing it is very powerful boon.

Brahma will just let the destruction take place and create world new as part of cycle since he is the creator, a neutral God, he really like to create even go as far as doing alabama, one of his quality is he doesn’t need worship and still powerful enough to stop anything, the thing is Brahma rarely intervene in matter both heavenly or in mortal realm, he is preoccupied doing his own thing, Brahma doesn’t care about curses it will not drain his power he is a constant, stagnant, status quo.

Shiva is totally out of question Shiva job is to destroy, to end things polar opposite of Vishnu, Shiva is God of destruction he have terrible true form, he is literally the samsara aka apocalypse, Shiva doesn’t discriminate with blessing however Shiva blessing is not as powerful, this trait of Shiva is why many demons worship Shiva.

However considering the possible RO I can understand why Brahma kinda “true route”.

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Of course, it’s as I said, no one route will be more fleshed out than the other! Each one has a reason to be, and each are losely based on the principles of each of the Trimurti!

Thank you very much for your thoughts!

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Gender lock is man or is it gender choice?

Your tags said choice, your post says man is locked.

Very big deal before I check it out.

It’s gender choice. The male gender-locked bit is about their previous wip I think

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Tried it. The end about having three routes and one being canon. It kinda shut me off from this

I question about what happened.

I’m not so certain how I like it.

This is correct. The gender-locked story is no longer being continued and I took some of its ideas to create this story.