Do any of these sound good?

It’s cool to have guns in fantasy, but including them would render swords useless. Why try to stab at someone when you could just shoot them?

It also sounds vaguely similar to Choice of Rebels. See: Choice of Rebels Part 1 WIP thread

Seems fairly similar to Magikiras: Magikiras (Finished) - Beta Testers Needed!

This is basically a popular trope. See: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WeComeInPeaceShootToKill

That said, it doesn’t mean that it has no potential. You’ll just be working with something which has been played around with a lot.