🌈 Dear Diary, We Created a Plot Hole! (A Slice-of-Life Fantasy Adventure set in the Philippines) ~ [UPDATED Aug 31 | 608,000 words]

So, for volume one you can choose between the sleepover or the investigation but you can’t do both in one playthrough?

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I don’t see why we couldn’t do both especially since our friend group has come with a way to deal with bully.

Usually, when a game has a branching path, you can only do one path at a time

@burninglights Thankies! :blush: “Don’t Let the Pillow Monsters Bite” is more of a placeholder title since I couldn’t think of anything else, but maybe I should keep it now, hehe.

@Christopher_Bull Thanks! I really shouldn’t, but it’s just hard not to think that way, you know?

@Kelly_Seastar Yup! You won’t be able to do both in the same playthrough.

I think I’ll be changing it so Patrick doesn’t tell the twins about Aunt Julie’s laptop until the end of Chapter 4, so there’ll be no other opportunity to do the investigation. The sleepover might provide some clues that may be helpful for B’s sidequest, but that’s not at all the main focus.

Although now that I think about it, maybe you can still join the sleepover if you do the investigation since Rosie’s house isn’t very far? You’ll miss out on most of the sleepover activities, but I think it makes sense especially because you can be mad at Aunt Julie and Uncle Robert in the investigation branch.

Oh, and if you’re curious, the investigation branch is IAC-related, but not for the reasons you might think! It’s way too early for the twins to know all that.

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Hello everyone!

So I just had an unexpected development: Aunt Julie and Uncle Robert will have a pet now! :dog: :cat:

They’ll be either an aspin or a puspin (non-specific mixed breed dogs and cats in the Philippines), partly for my convenience because there are too many breeds to choose from if I make that customizable as well.

You can choose their name, and you’ll have the choice to either pick a cat or a dog, unless you choose to be afraid of either cats or dogs, in which case it’ll automatically be the other one (you can’t be afraid of them if you have the puppy or kitty plushie since that would be MC’s fave animal).

And yup, you’ll also be able to have the [Animal Lover] Trait in Chapter 3! :paw_prints:


And oh, it only took three chapters, but you’ll finally be able to choose your twin’s gender in the next update!

You will encounter the choice just before you choose your relationship with your twin in the prologue. Do let me know if you have any problems with how the choices are worded!

Please note that this only changes your twin’s pronouns and other gendered terms—the MC will always have a fraternal opposite-sex twin. You’ll be able to choose how your twin usually dresses in Chapter 3 though!

And since we’re on the topic, I want to greet you all a :rainbow: Happy Pride Month! :rainbow: I know this is long overdue, but I wanted to make a post that’s a little more meaningful.

This choice was planned later in development because it’s a lot trickier to implement than just adding another set of variables, but I decided to do it much earlier since I think it’s best to present the choice in the story as early as possible.

I know how important it is, especially because I myself can relate—I had the same thoughts as MC too when I was younger, and even now I’m still not sure what to feel about myself.

Anyway, I hope this lets you play your twins much closer to what you all have envisioned! :blush:

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Will, there be a mention of it or just little something in the diary if you pick for both you and your twin to be trans or just not cis in general.

For example, you two feel closer or something because you can understand what each other is going through and can be there to help in ways others may not be able to.

I’m re-playing the game and I’m having trouble remembering if both or only one of you can hearing aids/glasses?

He glares at me with his black eyes, and just when I’m starting to think that I’m the worst twin ever, he punches me on the shoulder and nods. “I was worried you forgot about Stilinskish entirely.”

It says he has black eyes even though I pick for them to be brown.

In the survey, you asked about tropes and it made me think of this website https://tvtropes.org/

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I can’t wait. Thanks for the heads up. Make it a good one

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Oh, there’ll be a little something in the diary for sure. I don’t wanna promise anything, but I hope to have some mentions and conversations here and there (especially with your best friend/crush options and later with Maggie), although there won’t be anything in-depth as that isn’t really a focus of the story.

There might be a small relationship bonus, but it probably won’t be anything significant.

For now, only the MC can have them, but you’re free to headcanon the twin having them! There’s a bunch of other customization options for the twin too that aren’t included yet such as hair styles, but they’ll be available either in Chapter 3, or will be included in a later update once Volume 1 is complete. It’s not always easy to implement them in the story naturally.

Oh, and thanks for the report! I mistakenly put the twin’s favorite color instead of their eye color, hehe.

And nice try :wink: You’re gonna have to be more creative than that if you want me to click that link. Nope :stuck_out_tongue:

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I did want to ask if there would be conversations and stuff but I didn’t want you to feel pressured or something to do them and then end up having to do more work than necessary and burning out because of it.

If you do end up doing them that would be awesome if not it’s okay because as you said it’s not the story’s focus anyway.

And I just wanted to say I don’t expect a relationship bouns the example wasn’t meant as asking for one it was just to show what I thought would be in the diary if that makes sense?

Also, you mention Maggie and let’s just I can’t wait to say what happens when the twins meet her again because I know from personal experience how jarring it can be for both you and your parent to meet again after years as you both have changed so much and it can a lot to wrap your head around.

You said it’s not easy to naturally implement the twin’s customization options so why don’t you have a mention where the MC is looking in a mirror or something like other games do when picking what your MC looks like and that’s when you also pick the twin’s options too.

For example, you pick a hairstyle and the MC thinks something like they’re happy it’s different from their twins whose style is short and messy or that the MC is happy they both have the same look.

Another example is clothing and it’s something like you’re looking for your favourite comfy jumper and it’s been accidentally put with your twin stuff again which you don’t know-how as all their stuff is way more colourful or it says something like there is no way I’m going to find it as we both have the same taste in clothes.

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No worries. I’ll try my best then!

Yup, it’s going to be bittersweet for sure, especially considering the events that happened in IAC…

Thank you for the suggestions, but I mentioned the end of Volume 1 because I already have plans for how I’m going to do the customization.

Like I said, some of the customization options will be in Chapter 3, because that’s when you get ready for Rosie’s party. There’s already a mirror scene in the Prologue (where the MC makes fun of mirror scenes), I just didn’t put the twin’s customization there because it’s already loaded, and they’re not relevant yet at that point.

There’s also the fact that there’s an option where you’re writing the short story for yourself only, which make the MC give less focus on their twin. I don’t want to create duplicate choices for that option.

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So I was updating the diary entries to include pronouns (more on this later), and all of a sudden I get the idea: what if I make Paddy gender-selectable, so you can pick between Kuya Patrick or Ate Patricia?

Nobody really asked for this, but the more I thought about it, the more I wanted to do it. I didn’t even have to convince Patrick—he actually wonders in the story about what it’d be like if he’s the twins’ ate instead (Ate Paddy will wonder the opposite).

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Patricia will mostly have a similar appearance and personality to Patrick, but there’ll be a few differences in how they interact with other characters, so it’s not only a pronoun and name change.

I’m not sure if the choice will be available in the next update because I’d need to make a new drawing for her, but I’ll probably just put a placeholder in.

Anyway, I’d love to know if this is something you’re interested in!

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Hello everyone!

I was updating the diary with the character pronouns earlier like I said in the previous post, and since then I’ve been thinking about adding ‘they/them’ as JM and Lily’s second pronouns.

Lily and JM won’t start using them until after we finish their respective story worlds (Volume 4 and Volume 5 respectively), but I wanted to mention this sooner rather than later because we won’t be there for a looong time.

They’re still very young, so I wanted to make this a part of the story and come about naturally as they find out more about themselves and their identities, rather than just an arbitrary choice of wanting to have more diverse characters.

This won’t be reflected in the diary yet, but I’ll update their character pages in the blog once I also have Ate Paddy’s drawing!


Oh, and here’s a lil sneak peek of one of the stuffed toy choices. After being removed in the prologue, you’ll finally be able to name your plushies/stuffed toys again in Chapter 3!

(Please note that there’ll be platonic versions of the choice giving your stuffed toy as a gift to Wayne or Rosie if you don’t have a crush on them.)


I’ll be looking for beta testers for Chapter 3 very soon!

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@Franzinyte I am hyped! Can we already apply as beta testers? :partying_face:

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wanted beta testers

Hi hi hello hiii!

I am officially looking for beta testers for Chapter 3! Sorry for the delays everyone, I had computer problems on top of me getting sick.

I haven’t done any beta testing since release, so while this beta test primarily focuses on Chapter 3, I would also appreciate feedback for the previous chapters.

You can find the beta testing application form here! I welcome both new and old readers. All beta testers receive a 100% EXP bonus!

I will hold the beta test over in Discord (either privately or in the public server) or through here in the Choice of Games Forums via private message.

I will select the testers in a few days once the demo is ready, and I’ll keep the form open until I get enough testers. If you didn’t get selected or none of the options work for you, don’t worry! I will hold an open beta after the private testing is over.

Here are the highlights for the next update:

:sparkles: Update v2.1.3 Highlights :sparkles:

  • Volume 1, Chapter 3 (Home Bittersweet Home) is now complete!
  • 67,000+ total additional word count (including code)
  • 23 New Secrets to discover, 8 New Character Traits, 3 New Trinkets to collect, 2 New Quests to complete, and 1 New Song to sing-along!
  • You can now choose Paddy’s and your twin’s gender!
  • Aunt Julie and Uncle Robert’s introduction!
  • Meet your pet cat or dog!
  • Name you and your twin’s stuffed toys!
  • Even more customization options!
  • Get ready for Roselyna’s birthday party!
  • Sneak peek of Chapter 4!
  • Updated stat notification graphics!
  • Roselyna is now more huggable than ever!

@Scorporal You can now apply for beta testing! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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@Franzinyte Thank you I did. Discord is optional right? Cause I dont like it very much. :pensive:

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I just signed up for beta testing. Also, I’d love if the MC could have a crazy hair color like pink, green, or blue. Obviously not their natural hair, but maybe they dyed it on a rebellious streak.

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I just finished debugging and coding in the stat notifications!

I still need to do the new stat notification graphics and the emojis, then the beta test should be ready!


@Scorporal Yup, that’s why I gave the choice.

@Kelly_Seastar Thanks for the suggestion! It won’t be possible in Volume 1 since LCU doesn’t allow dyed hair (at least for elementary students), but maybe in Volume 2!


Edit: I finished working on the new stat notifications, so the beta test is almost ready! I just need to clean up some miscellaneous stuff, but I gotta go sleepy sleep since I’m still a lil sick and my fingers are starting to hurt.

I changed the stat notification font, and here’s a little preview:

I think it looks cleaner and hopefully it should be easier to read from a distance. I wanted to make little icons for each stat too, but it’s too much effort right now. Maybe I’ll consider them again in the future.

I’ve also changed most of the :star: symbols and assigned the traits with more appropriate emojis! Hopefully this helps better communicate which choices give traits, and which traits unlock special interactions.

I’ll try to work on Ate Paddy’s drawing when I get the test up and running, but I’m not sure if I can draw Aunt Julie and Uncle Robert. (And I still need to do Ma’am Bianes too.)

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I have selected the beta testers! I will keep the application form open for now, since it’s likely that I might select a smaller second batch of testers in a week or so, depending on how the testing goes, to keep it manageable for me. (There were also a couple I couldn’t message.)

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Hope it all goes well, I’m looking forward to playing after the kinks are worked out :slight_smile:

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Don’t know if im just blind but where’s the application?

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