Dao Ascension (WIP) [62K Words | 72K Patreon] [High Fantasy, Overpowered Protagonist, Chinese fantasy, Cultivation world, Xianxia, Jianghu]

Is their other cultivation games you know of other than Aura clash and path of Martial Arts??

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Hello @DaoImmerser
Thank you. I wil check when I have time.

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OP MC is my fav genre and I’m hooked already

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There isn’t much to add that hasn’t already been mentioned. The only suggestion I have for this WIP is to revise the introduction. Phrasing like ‘Proceed if you aren’t light-hearted’ comes across as unnecessarily abrasive or dismissive. I would recommend providing a list of potential trigger warnings or explicit content advisories, allowing readers to make an informed choice about whether to proceed with said story.

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Roses ? If you are talking about RO then there are 2 confirmed RO for now.

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Don’t worry I’m not planning on changing this.

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I’ve only added the information in codex that has already been written in the story, if I write all the big information for the upcoming updates then this will be spoiling the story.

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The main thing the game needs for now is spelling and grammar checks for smoother story telling. This game just needed feedback from us and the mistakes were unnoticed until we started finding them. It’s easy to miss stuff like that when u write it

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You need to thoroughly spell-check the existing text before adding anything else, like 5 pages in it’s full of mispellings and missing words, making it an unpleasant read.

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Seeing the title, I was so waiting for the inevitable “btw I don’t believe in ‘homosexuality’ so only Normal romance here :)” that pops up in the other games in this genre so I could just hide it and move on, was very pleasantly surprised.

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The Four Horsemen are complete(Path of Martial Arts,Aura Clash,Out of the Yinshan and now this)

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I love stories were mc is overpowered so please continue creating this great story!

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That’s a big relief, then!

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Ha! Right? Before I clicked on this, I was already bracing myself to be disappointed by the lack of same-sex romances like all other CN-inspired games, but the stars have finally aligned, it seems!

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Please whatever you do please don’t nerf the MC

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There will be no such thing as “Weak MC” in my book.

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I love pacing of the story thank u

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Words of a legend :clap::clap:

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This game is literally about a broken overpowered MC. Of course they are not getting nerfed. The MC literally has the ability to absorb energy from anywhere not to mention we gained our grandfather’s and uncles power. Our bloodline pretty much made us unbeatable even without those gifts. Maybe we have our own kryptonite somewhere but it’s not happening anytime soon.

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That spanking daddy scene :rofl: was the best.

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