Working now, once again thank you for your help.
Hello @HarrisPS
Thank you. I try to make a viki but looks like it’s only done by Leaders amd Moderators.
Hello @DaoImmerser
Sorry for the late answer but I’am all ways happy and ready to help.
Out of yinshan is not xianxia. It’s wuxia. Murim based story.
True but unless someone is a reader of those genres than to the casual observer they might as well be the same thing.
Hey, just saw this. A little suggestion. Maybe add more to the synopsis. Because a lot of these were implied by the Xianxia genre. I’m still going to read it since it’s a third ever Xianxia on this site.
I konw,I meant the four horsemen of east asian themed martial arts stories
I’m gonna do this in the next free update.
Added 13K words update for my patreon, making the patreon version 85K words long.
A power fantasy plot is always a hit.
I’ve read a good number of MTL xianxia novels, this is similarly interesting. As a suggestion I would recommend improving the grammar, along with exploring better structure and vocabulary as there are many spelling mistakes and the text can be a little bland, especially after the first few pages.
On the plus side, the plot moves at a good pace and doesn’t bore.
As a personal request, I would also like to play a more nuaced character who speaks little and prefers actions. The current options can sometimes make my character too cocky and cringy.
Most importantly, please have fun writing!
I’ve already made some changes which you’ll see in next free update, though I’m not able fully commit myself to improve the grammar as most of my time is spent writing new content for patreon weekly updates. Maybe someday I’ll try to complete my weekly goal earlier so I can work on improving things.
I’ve already added such choices, wait till the next free update and you won’t be disappointed.
Patreon version of the game has been updated with 10K words. Now making the game 95K words long.
Just a little question, what do you enjoy most in Xianxia novels ?
I like a grim dark Xianxia novels not with everybody is a dick and evil but more of the world is extremely unfair
The rise of weak to strong or strong to strongest, romance whenever there is some, the different cultivators in the demonic races and the wild demonic beasts and when the Mc show the immensity between heaven and earth to some asshole who is overconfident in his family’s power even when(sometimes because) the mc is a hypocritical asshole too.
Being the strongest and splitting the heavens easily, being feared considered a threat having the will to act cocky without a limit seeing people considered the strongest bow down or just being the strongest in secret like the manhwas Above Ten Thousand people and Strength Through adversity
Romance, mythos/demons/spirits, the eastern style and world setting, swords/martial arts/musical weapons, and the dynamics between characters. Also love how many xianxia always have good defeating evil. Plus love the overpowered characters kicking butt.
What exactly is the mc’s martial arts style? I know they inherited their grandfather’s martial arts but it’s not really stated what his style was. I know the mc can kinda use any style or technique but is there a specific one he inherited?
MC did not inherit any martial arts, but was give stuff like chi, qi or whatever cultivators like to absorb from the universe and it not only came from the grandfather but also the granduncle